[PC] Yume Nikki - "(Working... please wait...)" by NPbus_

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Yume Nikki
Console: PC
Title: (Working... please wait...)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: NPbus_

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[NPbus_]

A bit of a title discrepancy. The Kikiyama/Infinity OST calls it "Yumenikki" but it's listed on Youtube as "(Working...Please Wait...)" or "Save Screen Theme."

Also figured I should join in on the Yume Nikki trend.

[BrainyLucario]

Agh! I was working on this too... also the title should be Working please wait, as there is no official titles, me and Rwars have been using those of that same youtube set


Please inform us next time you decide to arrange something from this though, as we planned on arranging the whole ost eventually

[NPbus_]

Sorry for not letting you know! I suppose on that subject, I should mention that I also already have Flute Player also transcribed (can't submit it yet since I already have 2 submissions going on), and I was also planning on doing these ones:
- Title Screen
- NASU Title Screen
- FC Overworld
- FC Castle
That's all I have in mind for now.

(also titles for this one have been fixed)

[Rwars]

I was also planning on doing these ones:
- Title Screen
- NASU Title Screen
- FC Overworld
- FC Castle
That's all I have in mind for now.

Hey, I already have those tracks arranged to ready to submit, actually.

[NPbus_]

Alright, no problem. I'll stick with what I've already arranged for now, then.

[Latios212]

Please inform us next time you decide to arrange something from this though, as we planned on arranging the whole ost eventually

Hey, I already have those tracks arranged to ready to submit, actually.

While it's great to coordinate with other people to avoid overlap especially for submissions, it's not right to imply that someone else shouldn't arrange something. (Not saying you were, but that's the kind of tone I read.) It's a free world and people can arrange whatever they want.

[Latios212]

Anyway, a quick few things:
- The staff is indented appropriately but missing the "Piano" staff name to the left of the staff brace.
- The forward repeat bar isn't necessary and can be removed.
- The title of the piece: I'm not familiar with the soundtrack, but right now what you have is different from that of the YouTube video linked: "(Working...Please Wait...)" vs. "(Working... please wait...)" (i.e. with lowercase and a space). Is that intentional?

[Dude]

While it's great to coordinate with other people to avoid overlap especially for submissions, it's not right to imply that someone else shouldn't arrange something. (Not saying you were, but that's the kind of tone I read.) It's a free world and people can arrange whatever they want.

i mean if you like wasting your own time to make something that could possibly be lower quality than what's already there, i guess there's no harm in that.

[NPbus_]

Regarding the title, I had it case sensitive just as typical title layouts usually are, so to answer the question of if it's intentional to write the title like that, the answer is no, and that my brain went on autopilot when placing it.

All the adjustments will eventually be made when I have the time to fix it (which should be later today).

[NPbus_]

Aaaaand with that, I've addressed the issues that were brought up (including a title fix).

[Sebastian]

Awesome work! The only thing I see is that the composer/arranger was slightly misaligned. To save you time I went ahead and edited that.

Accepted.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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