[DELETED] [MUL] Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Red Rescue Team & Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue Rescue Team - "Frosty

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Red Rescue Team & Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Blue Rescue Team
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Frosty Grotto
Instrumentation Two Pianos
Arranger: Sean081799

[Altissimo]

for the record if any formatting needs to be edited on this it's my fault and i'll fix it myself

[AmpharosAndy]

Are the little flutters in bar 13 and 14 purposefully omitted? I do understand why, to be fair, if so. Other than that it looks good to go!

[Sean081799]

No, I just didn't catch them. In fact I didn't even notice them until you pointed them out (my mistake - this is my first submitted arrangement).

[Zeila]

You did a good job, but it could be cleaned up a bit

Formatting stuff (since you only have notepad I took care of it):
- I left the copyright alone since the other sheets on site have slashes (albeit the wrong url...), but lately people have been using commas instead
- The abbreviations for piano 1 and 2 should be I and II
- I think the game title should be the same on the site, but if it's too long the ones Ben submitted on site have Blue first and include a colon
- The pedal markings were noticeably misaligned, and some crescendo markings are colliding with the bar lines
- Resized the echoed notes to make more of a distinction
- I changed the key signature to Bb minor but I'm not confident about that (nor the enharmonic spellings) so it's best if you get another opinion
- Since your coda is only one measure and is identical to the penultimate one, I got rid of it and put "D.C." instead. And if you were to put a coda anyways, it should be a separate system. I also spaced out the last system a bit so with both of those changes the last page isn't nearly as cramped
- For the last measure, instead of cramping two layers into one staff, I moved it over to the LH and switched clefs. Also, it might be better if the piano 1 player were to play the second layer but I left it as is
- I resized everything to 90% so it's 4 pages instead of 5

Note stuff:
- m1+ similar instances (pno I) every 4th sixteenth note is an Enat; m3+ similar instances every 4th sixteenth note is an Eb. Also, it should crescendo until m5
- m9-12 (pno II) I don't think there should be any accents; you're also missing a Db in m9/10 and C's in m11/12 (on top of the off-beat notes), I changed the LH clef to treble, lowered the melody down an octave, and switched both staves. If this isn't satisfactory for you, feel free to change it back
- m13/14 the tie isn't necessary and I think dotted quarter notes would look cleaner
- m16 (pno I) LH last eighth note is a Db; (pno II) LH should be dyads
- m17+ (pno I) I think you should get rid of the accents, but I left them there

There are more incorrect notes towards the end so just take another listen through and revise it

File: [mus]

[Sean081799]

Thank you. I'm not too experienced with this, and I trust your judgement more than my own. I'll try to do some touch ups.

[Maelstrom]

Are you there?

[Sean081799]

Haven't gotten a chance to work on it really, sorry. :/ (And since I don't have the full version of Finale, it's really difficult to modify)

[Maelstrom]

I don't think you understand. Zeila gave you .mus. Use that.

[Sean081799]

I keep getting this when I try loading.

https://gyazo.com/e9205deca947ad2b9abdaba73ea5112c

https://gyazo.com/d912f0f4a6a06ee04d5f583cd0f98be5

Do you know how to fix this possibly?

[Trasdegi]

Like said, run the finale notepad installer again.

[Sean081799]

Alright that worked, should've thought of that sooner. I'll try to do some stuff this weekend. Sorry for the long delay.

[Maelstrom]

Shelving this for now. Post this again when the files are fixed. Please don't just submit the same sheet again. If you need help, we have threads for it: http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=685.0