[PC] Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari) - "Plant" by Olimar12345

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Cave Story (Doukutsu Monogatari)
Console: PC
Title: Plant
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Olimar12345

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[Olimar12345]

[Maelstrom]

Two things:
Why no staccatos in the LH?
In m28, the ties are colliding with the 2nd layer. In fact, a few touch-ups on the ties in the 2nd half would make it look a lot nicer.

If NoS posts on this thread as Olimar, I will personally stab him.

[mikey]

Well tbh I had no intention to.  And I'm not impersonating olimar, I'm dressing up as him for Halloween (at least this isn't like the Maestro fiasco of 2014, that was crazy)

[Maelstrom]

Eh, it was more of a joke that would seem weird with my new profile pic.
Besides, you can't really pass this off as dressing up for halloween when halloween is 4 weeks away.

[mikey]

I take Halloween very seriously

I suggest you do the same

[The Deku Trombonist]

Shops here have already been selling Christmas decorations for a couple of weeks. May as well jump in early.

[Olimar12345]

Two things:
Why no staccatos in the LH?
In m28, the ties are colliding with the 2nd layer. In fact, a few touch-ups on the ties in the 2nd half would make it look a lot nicer.

-Because they don't sound light or separated.

-In m28 the highest tie is colliding with the first layer. I can adjust that one, but other than maybe moving the one in the previous layer down a couple pixels, what else did you have in mind?

-(not mentioned) I left the unison as it looks in the LH m4 because I thought it looked weird to have it shown with the open note head and a tie, even though I wanted the note rearticulated before being held out again (due to conflicting layers). Thoughts on this? I don't do this elsewhere in the piece because this is the only instance where it would be an open note head against a solid one.

[Latios212]

-In m28 the highest tie is colliding with the first layer. I can adjust that one, but other than maybe moving the one in the previous layer down a couple pixels, what else did you have in mind?

That's all (and same goes for the left end of the tie in 27).

-(not mentioned) I left the unison as it looks in the LH m4 because I thought it looked weird to have it shown with the open note head and a tie, even though I wanted the note rearticulated before being held out again (due to conflicting layers). Thoughts on this? I don't do this elsewhere in the piece because this is the only instance where it would be an open note head against a solid one.

Had no problem figuring out what it meant when I opened it yesterday, and it looks fine. It's good.

[Olimar12345]

The files have been updated.

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