[MOB] Pokémon GO - "Battle! (Wild Pokémon)" by JDMEK5

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon GO
Console: Mobile
Title: Battle! (Wild Pokémon)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: JDMEK5

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[JDMEK5]

I really had to push myself to finish this one.

[Latios212]

Yay, more Pokémon GO! I don't have much time right now, but here's a superficial review.

- Layers could use some tidying up in places. I'd suggest flipping some notes/ties in 13 and 15 and adjusting rest showing/placement in 15, 16, 26, maybe 13.
- Capitalize "Inc." at the end of the copyright info
- Seems to me like there should be something in beat 2.75 of measures 5 and 9, RH. Though I'd have to listen closer to hear what it is.

[Tobbeh99]

I think you can fit 5 measures in the first system, so that you after that continue on with 4 measures/system. Just broaden the margins a bit and it'll work.

In measure 2 LH, is the last 16th really there, isn't it just Bb-G (two 8ths), that's what I'm hearing.

Also are the 4 last measures even in the song? In the youtube video you linked, it repeats after measure 28.

[JDMEK5]

- Layers could use some tidying up in places. I'd suggest flipping some notes/ties in 13 and 15 and adjusting rest showing/placement in 15, 16, 26, maybe 13.
- Capitalize "Inc." at the end of the copyright info
- Seems to me like there should be something in beat 2.75 of measures 5 and 9, RH. Though I'd have to listen closer to hear what it is.

Fixed all things save the last bit you mentioned. I slowed it down but the only thing I'm really picking up on the beat in question is the harmony that actually lands on beat 2.5. Unless I'm still missing it.

I think you can fit 5 measures in the first system, so that you after that continue on with 4 measures/system. Just broaden the margins a bit and it'll work.

In measure 2 LH, is the last 16th really there, isn't it just Bb-G (two 8ths), that's what I'm hearing.

Also are the 4 last measures even in the song? In the youtube video you linked, it repeats after measure 28.

-Aye, you're right. Thanks.

-I slowed it down and I do distinctly hear it. Unless it's a hardware issue with my headphones or I'm just insane this evening and imagining it.

-Even in the video I linked they are. Just pay careful attention. The reason I wrote them out is because the top note of the RH in measure 29 is a C#, not a D.

[Tobbeh99]

-Even in the video I linked they are. Just pay careful attention. The reason I wrote them out is because the top note of the RH in measure 29 is a C#, not a D.

Y it's there, I just heard wrong. BUT, the loop is actually incorrect!

Here's a video of someone playing Pokémon GO, with music on. Listen at like 2:50 and you can hear that it loops differently.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nzMirqGaxSc

Also I'm not sure on the higher voice in measures 17-20. I listened very carefully and arranged it like this in my version:

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The thing is that I think the higher voices goes more like D-F#-B-A-B-A-G-F#.

[JDMEK5]

Y it's there, I just heard wrong. BUT, the loop is actually incorrect!

Ah, you're totally right. Thank ye; my bad.

Also I'm not sure on the higher voice in measures 17-20. I listened very carefully and arranged it like this in my version:

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The thing is that I think the higher voices goes more like D-F#-B-A-B-A-G-F#.

I'm not hearing what you're hearing but what I am hearing is closer to what you have there than what I had in mine originally.

[Latios212]

Did some reviewing over Skype. We good! (Yet another Pokémon battle theme to add to your collection...)

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