[Wii] Xenoblade Chronicles - "Zanza" by Maelstrom

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Xenoblade Chronicles
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Zanza
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Maelstrom

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[Maelstrom]

It's about time.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v6xQyJlt7EE

[Sebastian]

YES. More Xenoblade. Love the music from this game.

Some feedback:
- There should be spaces in between the Quarter Note, "=", and "58" in the metronome marking (You've got it right with your "100" BPM marking in M. 11).
- I don't believe the "B" in "Composed/Arranged by" should be capitalized.
- There seems to be missing and/or wrong notes in the melody of M. 9 & 10. You might want to review those measures.
- You might want to put some more space in between the systems (excluding the first page). You have quite a bit of space at the bottom of page 2 & 3, and some of the systems seem cramped, especially between the second last and last system.
- You're missing the "/" at the end of the url.

I gotta give you credit! This song is really hard to translate to piano, but you seemed to have done an excellent job.

[Maelstrom]

All fixed.

[nutella511]

Great arrangement. Really happy to see another Xenoblade arrangement.

There are a couple of small things I would change:

In measure 13, the articulation on beat 2.5 is missing.

In measure 45, the articulation and pedal marking are overlapping.

There still isn't a space between the = and 58 in the tempo marking.

[Maelstrom]

All fixed, with a few bonus changes to boot.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot