[PC] Touhou 13: Ten Desires - "The Youkai Girl at the Gate" by Static

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Static

#15
October 01, 2016, 02:58:53 PM
One very small change - I added a missing note in the chord in bar 45. However, I have another small accidental question with this part here:



Now I'm not exactly a music theory expert, but should that A# and C# be a Bb and Db because it's the pickup to the Ebm section? I was thinking it should be but because of the L.H. chords there in bar 29, I wasn't too sure.

Maybe I'm just overthinking this lol.

WaluigiTime64

#16
October 01, 2016, 03:41:07 PM
Well considering that the Ebm section is on a new system, and the key signature change is very apparent, I wouldn't necessarily change the accidentals. I'd say it's fine as it is. (I'm no music theory expert either though).

Alternatively you could just make that section D#m instead, but that's up to you.
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Static

#17
October 03, 2016, 02:42:45 PM
I changed that last section to D#m because that makes a lot more sense, at least to me. Also, I made some very minor formatting adjustments. The links in the op should be updated.

WaluigiTime64

#18
October 03, 2016, 03:30:32 PM
The accidentals are all good too.

Just one small thing: The 8vb from M.30 to M.37 says "8va".
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October 03, 2016, 03:57:04 PM
Using 8va for 8vb is a Finale default, and both variations are acceptable as far as I know. I've seen both 8vb and 8va used as 8vb on other sheets on-site here including ones from me that have been accepted in the past (as well as other sheet music in general).

Unless it's absolutely necessary, I don't really see the need to change it.

WaluigiTime64

#20
October 03, 2016, 04:05:45 PM
Quote from: Static on October 03, 2016, 03:57:04 PMUsing 8va for 8vb is a Finale default, and both variations are acceptable as far as I know. I've seen both 8vb and 8va used as 8vb on other sheets on-site here including ones from me that have been accepted in the past (as well as other sheet music in general).

Unless it's absolutely necessary, I don't really see the need to change it.
Yeah, that's pretty true, and I've seen a few like that myself. It's not completely necessary, just something that bugs me.
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Maelstrom

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November 05, 2016, 02:11:18 PM
It good

Zeta

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November 05, 2016, 02:11:23 PM
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