[DELETED] [3DS] Pokémon Shuffle - "Silbern Museum" by DocDoom2

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Shuffle
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Silbern Museum
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: DocDoom2

[DocDoom2]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y_xNiJg95cg

Will change the title, was Silber in another video.

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

Not bad.

Some basic formatting stuff you should do:
- Indent the first system
- Measure numbers
- Optional, but a musical direction would be great
- Have the first 4 measures repeat to save space
- Lower the first system to de crowd the title, subtitle, etc.
- After the first 4 measures, write "simile" and hide all the staccatos (if you can't do this, I can help!). You could also write "staccato" and then have slurs over legato passages.
- Enharmonics; all of your F flats should be E naturals, as it's the leading tone to the dominant (F). You also should change the spellings in M. 13: make it sharps leading to the note, since they're all leading tones.
IE: C#-D, A-Bb, E natural to F.
- Minor thing, but the URL should read "NinSheetMusic.org".

[DocDoom2]

Thanks for the help, I'll get on it right away!
I'm assuming when you say write simile and delete the staccatos you mean just the left hand, correct?
Thanks again!

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

No, do it for both hands.

[DocDoom2]

Alright sorry about that.
I wasn't able correct these because of my demo's limitations.

- Indent the first system
- Measure numbers
- Lower the first system to de crowd the title, subtitle, etc.

But otherwise the sheets are now updated with what I was able to correct!
If you or anyone else could help with those things it'd be much appreciated.
Let me know if there's anything else!

[Bespinben]

We can talk about formatting all day, but we need the actual notes to be there first. There's almost ALWAYS more to a song than just melody and bass -- in this case, the harmonies played by the supporting baritone/horn duo.

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Now you do the rest.

[DocDoom2]

Thanks for helping me there!
I've added your corrections and finished up the rest as best as I could.
I don't mean to go off-topic or anything, but what Finale products are necessary to have to be able to have all the right tools for fixing a sheet, or is Finale Notepad all that's needed?
I currently just have Notepad 2012 (thought it was a demo ), and Finale's website confused me on what features each program had exactly.
Thanks again, and I'll update the sheets once I fix the formatting that got messed up when transfering!

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

You really need a paid version of Finale for that. Notepad is designed to frustrate you into buying a better product.

[DocDoom2]

Alright I got the 30 day trial of Song Writer and that seems to have all my bases covered.
I've edited the files with the notes and some fixed formatting (first measure indent, etc.).
Let me know if I forgot anything on this revision!

[Maelstrom]

Formatting stuff:
Pno. markings need to go
crescendos should not collide with note stems
Note stems should not collide with note stems
Why even are the rests hanging out below their default position in m12
The "boldly" is too bold and large.
The simile marking makes no sense where it is now.
m28 etc. combine rests that are in 2 layers at the same time into one rest.

[DocDoom2]

Thanks for the help!
I'll get on fixing those things.

[Bespinben]

Archived for stagnation.