[NDS] Golden Sun: Dark Dawn - "Kolima" by Onionleaf

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Golden Sun
Game: Golden Sun: Dark Dawn
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Kolima
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Onionleaf

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[Onionleaf]

[Maelstrom]

A few things:
-Make sure you right align the composer/arranger
-Respace a few measures, like 16, by clicking on them and it should be a little less cluttered.
-Were the grace notes in the intro left out for a reason?
-That last system is not repeated, as the melody is actually different.
-m17-18 - LH - Those full chords are repeated, not just one note.

Fix/comment on this and we should be good to go.

[Onionleaf]

Thanks for the helpful points! I made the necessary adjustments, except for one. I wasn't quite sure where exactly the difference in melody was in that last system, so I checked the original MIDI rip file and found that the notes are all the same in the last two phrases of the song.

Also, I added a bit more to the first two measures, including the grace notes and the bell.

Let me know if I missed anything!

[Zeta]

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