[NDS] Mario Kart DS - "Tick Tock Clock" by Sebastian, E. Gadd Industries & TheClassicalLenny

[daj]

Especially with octaves.
Even for someone like myself who's fairly good at octaves, it's nearly impossible to get those octaves in rapid succession without creating an unwanted harsh tone.

I'm thinking Ravel's Miroirs IV and Schubert/Liszt's Erlkonig!
chances are you were thinking bout those too haha right

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

Yeah, but with those you aren't playing quietly in a relaxed piece.
Erlkonig especially, you're playing ff so it doesn't really matter.
Plus, the fact is that most pianists (period) can't play either, much less the people looking to play VGM from the site.

[Maelstrom]

A few quick suggestions:
-There are 16ths missing in the bass clef. It's pretty clear when you listen closely.
-The intro gets intentionally out of sync in the original, but that's not in your piece.
-m23-30 - LH - Some clear 2nd harmonies are missing and it wouldn't be that hard to add them in. In addition, double check every off beat of that section. It moves.

[Sebastian]

Ugh.
Sorry about my inactivity. My bad.

-There are 16ths missing in the bass clef. It's pretty clear when you listen closely.

This is what Bloop and I were talking about near the beginning of this sub.

-The intro gets intentionally out of sync in the original, but that's not in your piece.

A few others and I discussed this. We decided to leave it out. It's just an echo that gets, as you say, noticeably out of sync. It's not technically a note change/addition or anything.

-m23-30 - LH - Some clear 2nd harmonies are missing and it wouldn't be that hard to add them in. In addition, double check every off beat of that section. It moves.

Uh, I'll get this checked out.

[E. Gadd Industries]

What needs to be done to this?
I'll fix it up here soon.

[Sebastian]

Waitin' on Meal to reply

[Maelstrom]

Incorrect.
We're waiting on

-m23-30 - LH - Some clear 2nd harmonies are missing and it wouldn't be that hard to add them in. In addition, double check every off beat of that section. It moves.

Uh, I'll get this checked out.

[E. Gadd Industries]

I didn't finish tonight, but I'll work on it first thing in the morning.

EDIT: Well, actually, Mael, would you mind doing it, please?

[Sebastian]

-m23-30 - LH - Some clear 2nd harmonies are missing and it wouldn't be that hard to add them in.

In this version, the accompaniment is consequent throughout the whole song (mostly ascending fifths for the bass; chords are always on the same octave). I deleted the lower notes in m. 23-30, resulting in an emptier sound.

I guess that works. I'll do some messing with it.

We decided on deleting those to give it an "emptier" sound.

In addition, double check every off beat of that section. It moves.

The harmony note(s) change(s), but we don't have the harmony notes in the sheet for reasons above. The notes we have are in the original (the upbeat).
The only incorrect notes I found are beats 1.5 of 26 & 30. Those actually stay the same as the previous 2 beats for one extra beat. Those have been fixed and links updated.
I have access to Finale. Yay! 

[E. Gadd Industries]

Sooooo... Is everything clear now?

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