[GBC] Pokémon Gold Version & Pokémon Silver Version - "Ice Path" (Replacement) by Echo

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Gold Version & Pokémon Silver Version
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Ice Path
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Echo


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Edit (existing arranger remains)

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[Echo]

Thanks to Latios for his help in formatting the sheet and for some creative consulting!

[Tobbeh99]

Nice arrangement!

-Staring of, I think you make good use of slurs in this arrangement to show that the song should have a legato feel. I'm thinking especially about the bass line.

-Page 2 and 3 looks a bit awkward the way the systems are spaced. Make them closer to each other. Also I noticed that the page size is 77%. Imo, I think that is too small, make it to like 85% and it's fine, I usually try to keep it at least around 85% and never below 80%.

[Sebastian]

Like Tobbeh said, nice arrangement!
There are a few things I noticed:
- From M. 13-onward, you seem to be missing that voice that is playing in the previous measures. You could easily incorporate it. Here is a small example of something I'm looking for:

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Obviously, there are some parts that would be impossible to play, but you could easily make it playable (move some notes up an octave, take some notes out, hand crossings, etc.)
- The titles, composer/arranger names, and copyright info are mis-aligned by an extremely tiny bit.

This arrangement is very good! Maybe fiddle around with that extra voice; see if you can incorporate it. I don't see it as that big of a deal, but it'd be awesome if you could add it. I'd like your thoughts on that : )

[Dudeman]

- From M. 13-onward, you seem to be missing that voice that is playing in the previous measures. You could easily incorporate it. Here is a small example of something I'm looking for:

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Obviously, there are some parts that would be impossible to play, but you could easily make it playable (move some notes up an octave, take some notes out, hand crossings, etc.)

Lol, Latios and I have been messing around with this some as well as part of the unofficial project. Making it playable as a second layer in the right hand is nigh-impossible while also keeping the original tone of that voice. However, we have thought about making that voice into the left hand part instead, dropping the current baseline in favor of it. Something to think about.

[Sebastian]

Lol, Latios and I have been messing around with this some as well as part of the unofficial project. Making it playable as a second layer in the right hand is nigh-impossible while also keeping the original tone of that voice. However, we have thought about making that voice into the left hand part instead, dropping the current baseline in favor of it. Something to think about.

Whoops, sorry about that. I need to learn to read xD
Thanks for pointing that out, Dudeman.

[FireArrow]

nvm was looking at the one you were replacing

good job

[Latios212]

This is basically ready to go, but I do agree with Tobbeh on the spacing - you don't have to feel obligated to use the entire three pages if the systems have that much space in between them; this looks pretty funny. If you don't mind, I can put 6 systems on page 2 for you.

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