[DELETED] [GBA] The Legend of Zelda: The Minish Cap - "Intro Screen" by JDMEK5

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Submission Information:
Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: The Minish Cap
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Intro Screen
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: JDMEK5

[JDMEK5]

[Tobbeh99]

Nice!

Only one thing I could suggest: To incorporate the first drum hits, at the very beginning, in a pickup measure.

...also you need a dynamic

[Maelstrom]

Nice!

Only one thing I could suggest: To incorporate the first drum hits, at the very beginning, in a pickup measure.

...also you need a dynamic

Also, that instrument that has those repeated 16th triplet notes is actually held, and would give a nice harmony to the RH.
Fee free to add any articulations. Accents might be nices, as would a cresc.

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

To summarize:
Needs a pickup measure with the F sixteenth triplet.
The piece actually is in B flat major, modulating to F via a secondary dominant of C7. As such, two flats in le key signature.
Opening dynamic, preferably forte.
Also, "bright" seems kinda odd for a musical marking.

[JDMEK5]

Updated.

...also you need a dynamic

I argue this all the time with folks. Not everything needs a dynamic. Pokémon sound effect chimes for example on the GameBoy. That being said, this one could benefit so I added one.

[Bespinben]

You've arranged the orchestration in a very closely positioned fashion. Trying exploiting more of the upper and lower registers of the piano to more fully recreate the colors and timbres of the piece.

[JDMEK5]

Do you have something in mind? The trouble I'm seeing is hand width cuz so many things land at the same time. I don't want the need for any glissando 10th-reaches in this one.