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[3DS] Pokémon Picross - "Stage (Picross)" by Yug Guy

Started by Zeta, March 02, 2016, 02:21:06 PM

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Yug_Guy


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Zeila

- You're missing the indent
- in m1/4, beat 4 should be and A and F#
- There's an E on the and of beat 4 m6 in the RH
- There are straight Es from m13-19 with the same rhythm as the RH, but I only added them in m17-19 (tbh it doesn't really add much though)
- I tried incorporating the flute part in m5-8, but it might be better to leave it out

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Yug_Guy

Quote from: Zeila on April 05, 2016, 08:51:09 PM- You're missing the indent
I did not realize this was a requirement. Thanks for fixing that for me.
Quote from: Zeila on April 05, 2016, 08:51:09 PM- I tried incorporating the flute part in m5-8, but it might be better to leave it out
Yeah. I appreciate the effort you put in to try to make it work, but I don't think it can sound natural in this arrangement. I've taken it out for now. :(

Otherwise, I've updated the OP with the rest of your changes. Thank you so much for that!

Yug_Guy


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JDMEK5

The C# in the RH at measure 10 is unnotated for whatever reason. It's invisible despite being C natural in playback.
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Yug_Guy

Quote from: JDMEK5 on May 28, 2016, 07:24:48 PMThe C# in the RH at measure 10 is unnotated for whatever reason. It's invisible despite being C natural in playback.
Fixed

Sebastian

This sheet is almost there!
I did a few edits for you since you have Notepad.
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/epm42an5x67u66s/AAA8NWAafM1PE2WvUFNiUnC4a?dl=1

What I changed:
- I fixed some wrong notes in M. 1, 2, 5, & 6, as well as some formatting.
- I right-aligned the composer/arranger.
- I put a quieter dynamic marking in M. 9. It's noticeably quieter from M. 9-12.
- It's also 2 octaves higher through those measures.
- Missing some notes from M. 13-16.
- Few wrong notes in the last 4 measures.

Also, fun fact: This is the same composer who wrote the Paper Mario music :P
 
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Yug_Guy

Quote from: Sebastian on June 03, 2016, 08:31:31 AMIf you don't agree with something above or if you have any questions, just ask!
Nope, everything looks A-OK. Thanks! OP updated.

JDMEK5

Latios and I went over this on Skype. Just added a few notes to measures 11 and 12. Everything else was a tad bit of formatting.

If you're good with the following result, update the OP and we'll be good to go.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/93589150/Pokemon%20Picross%20StageJD5.mus
"Today's goal strongly involves not dying. Because nobody likes to wake up dead."

My Arrangements
Finale Version(s): Finale Notepad 2012, Finale 2012, Finale v26

Yug_Guy

I was just thinking I should bump this thread today, lol.

Yeah, everything looks good. Links updated.

EDIT: The .musx file is not the correct one, and I don't know how to delete it from the NSM Panel.

Latios212

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