[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "Cozy Cabin" by Nebbles

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Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Epic Yarn
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Cozy Cabin
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nebbles

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[Nebbles]

[DonValentino]

M. 3 onwards: there's this bass you only included in ms. 35 and 36 that's all over the place. Please try to include it in the rest of the piece too! Also, there's stuff missing generally, but most noticeably in the section from 27 to the end.

[Shadoninja]

we didn't include the cello part at 3 to 8 and 27 onwards because it would honestly be a mess and in my opinion wouldn't be very good musically.

[Bespinben]

stuff missing generally

Here's one such thing.


Before, with only the horn and bass, you only had a barebones sketch of the IV > V > I progression, but with the flute choir, you can hear the colorful tertian extensions: Amaj11 > B11 > E.

There's a lot of harmony in the piece that doesn't have a melody presence, but contribute greatly to the substance of the piece. Try to pick it out.

[DonValentino]

we didn't include the cello part at 3 to 8 and 27 onwards because it would honestly be a mess and in my opinion wouldn't be very good musically.

Quite the contrary I think, the moving bass would be a lot more interesting musically than the current one.

[Nebbles]

Hmm, if it's more accurate, than I'd be more inclined to go with the moving bass.

[Nebbles]

Everything should be updated accordingly.

[Nebbles]

...bump?

[DonValentino]

Hmm, if it's more accurate, than I'd be more inclined to go with the moving bass.

Everything should be updated accordingly.

What exactly have you changed? The intro is still not as Bespin pointed out, and I see no changes in the bass whatsoever.

[Nebbles]

...I thought I updated the files? Ugh, dammit, sorry. Let me fix it.

[Nebbles]

Okay, hopefully that's right now.

[mastersuperfan]

Doesn't look like they've been updated, still.

[DonValentino]

I see. Good then!

Doesn't look like they've been updated, still.

True dat ^^''
Could you please try again?

[Nebbles]

Ugh, I'm sorry, I'm not sure why they haven't updated. I'll get to it when I can.