[GB] Super Mario Land - "Ending" (Replacement) by Latios212

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Land
Console: Game Boy
Title: Ending
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Latios212]

(beginning at 35 secs)

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

Only problem I see is the DS al Fine. Usually in this case you'd want to use a DS al Coda, where you repeat back to the segno or whatever the hell it's called and then at a specific measure go to a coda; with the al fine, you just play to the fine marking and that's it.

[Latios212]

Whoops. I think I meant to use just "D.S." since there's no measure in the middle of the song to jump from the coda to - it just jumps back to measure 9 and then goes right from 27 to 28 the second time.

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

That'd be the one. It's all good though, everything else looks sound!

[Tobbeh99]

D.S. al fine also works, but you have to put a "fine" mark at the very end to make it work.

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

At that point, however, it's just redundant. Just best to stick with D.S.
Anything else? The rest of it looks sound.

[DonValentino]

Would it be too much to ask you to arrange the part from 00:08 too? Truth is it's different from the usual Stage Clear theme since it has an ending and not that "dundundun" part from when Daisy transforms into a monster. C'mon, it's ez! lol

That way you can also make it a nice 2-page arrangement, the way you have it is too cluttered anyway...

Why not show the articulations of the LH in ms. 9-16? They're kinda important xD

I haven't checked accuracy, but sounds good at first listen... Anyways, please fix this first and we'll save that for later.

[Latios212]

Oh, I just didn't do it because I thought it was a separate track Sure, I can add it in. Re-size everything and show articulation, will do too.

[Latios212]

Better.

[Tobbeh99]

I think it's better to use an 8va line rather than a text in the beginning, I mean, it's only 8 measures.

[DonValentino]

Better.

A *lot* better. I'm with Tobbeh on the octaves though xD
That way you could put the metronome marking where you had the text, and lower the octave line to where you had the metronome marking.

[Latios212]

Okey doke! All done.

[Sebastian]

The octave signs are kind of an eye sore.
Maybe do it similar to this?
http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/download/pdf/2736

[Latios212]

That's exactly what I undid as per request >_>
Either way works just fine...