[GBC] Pokémon Pinball - "Title Screen" by Th3Gavst3r

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Pinball
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Title Screen
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r

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[Th3Gavst3r]

Never quite been able to forget this one

[Zeila]

It sounds pretty good! I suggest you should space out the systems on the second page. Also, if you hid the rests in m6-8, you should hide the one at the end too. Maybe you should hide the rests in m5 and 9 as well (or if not, bring them down to the normal position)

[Th3Gavst3r]

Thanks for looking through! After all this time I was about to give this a bump in the morning[emoji14]Fixed the end rest, not sure about the ones in 5 and 9 though. Somehow removing them makes the beat feel... empty I guess. For more concrete logic, it might be good to mark the pause since it would outline the melody better? I did move them out of the crappy default position though, looks better.

Oh right, spaced the systems out too

[Olimar12345]

Updating team did the ol' looksie thing through Skype. After giving it our rounds, this was the final product:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/59554832/nsm/NSM%20subs/Pok%C3%A9mon%20Pinball%20-%20Title%20Screen12345.mus

It had some wrong notes here and there and other small discrepancies, but was solid. We just helped it get from good to great C:
If you're down with these changes, update the files in the OP and we'll be done here! Great work, man!

[Bespinben]

Bump for Th3Gavst3r... yodelayheehoo!

[Th3Gavst3r]

Been talking to Latios, I love the edits except for removing the bass note in M 10. I get the feeling the song suddenly loses a lot of depth with just that dyad and I'm super convinced that beat 4 is, from the best of my google search ability, an Eb major chord (pls don't stone me). I'm absolutely certain that I hear Bb, G, and Eb at least. I agree that the bass note I had before was way out of place, but after experimenting with octaves a lot this sounds much better to me while still mimicking the original tune:


I've updated the files, let me know your thoughts?

[Olimar12345]

Cool. Yep, Bb is definitely the lowest note in the chord there, just not that low one!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Olimar12345.

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