[GCN] Super Mario Sunshine - "Delfino Airstrip" (Replacement) by E. Gadd Industries

[Olimar12345]

It's pretty close:

-I would redistribute the measures-per-system to be 5-4-4-4-4-4-4-4 for consistency's sake.
-Measures 18 and 20, LH: I'd add a courtesy natural to the F at the end of the bars, to differentiate from the F# in the RH.
-Add a double bar line at 26 (key change).
-If you can, please make the "tremolo optional" text an expression rather than a text box. An expression is linked to the exact measure and will move with it, while a text box would remain stationary,if needed to move.
-Octave Bb's in measure 30 RH should be A#'s.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Everything has been updated! Sorry about the wait, my teachers have been assigning a TON of homework as of recent.

[Olimar12345]

Cool, good work!

[Zeta]

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