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[GCN] Super Mario Sunshine - "Delfino Airstrip" (Replacement) by E. Gadd Industries

Started by Zeta, January 18, 2016, 05:45:15 PM

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E. Gadd Industries

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E. Gadd Industries

"Everyone is crazy but me"
-The Sign Painter


Mfw I help an Italian plumber fall into the abyss while he was shouting something about red coins

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E. Gadd Industries

"Everyone is crazy but me"
-The Sign Painter


Mfw I help an Italian plumber fall into the abyss while he was shouting something about red coins

[close]

E. Gadd Industries

"Everyone is crazy but me"
-The Sign Painter


Mfw I help an Italian plumber fall into the abyss while he was shouting something about red coins

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BrainyLucario

I don't see anything else wrong with the sheet. That might be just me, though. It looks a lot better than the one currently on site. Nice work!
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E. Gadd Industries

"Everyone is crazy but me"
-The Sign Painter


Mfw I help an Italian plumber fall into the abyss while he was shouting something about red coins

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E. Gadd Industries

"Everyone is crazy but me"
-The Sign Painter


Mfw I help an Italian plumber fall into the abyss while he was shouting something about red coins

[close]

E. Gadd Industries

"Everyone is crazy but me"
-The Sign Painter


Mfw I help an Italian plumber fall into the abyss while he was shouting something about red coins

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BrainyLucario

In the RH of Measures 10 and 12, is there any way you could combine the quarter rest and the eighth rest? If there is, it would make said measures look less disorganized and complex. If that's not possible, then I really don't see anything wrong with the sheet concerning formatting. You've shown the third beat throughout the piece, which makes the rhythm notation correct.
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E. Gadd Industries

I've been told in the past not to condense rests like that, else I would.
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Pianist Da Sootopolis

I'd flip the note beams in things like m.8 so that your layers are layered, for lack of a better word (second layer below the first one consistent with the half note), but it's not entirely necessary.
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TheMarioPianist

Hey, E Gadd and I talked about all the changes made in this file, so this is the most updated version. He should update the files in the morning.

Quote from: Pianist Da Sootopolis on March 07, 2016, 07:41:18 PMI'd flip the note beams in things like m.8 so that your layers are layered, for lack of a better word (second layer below the first one consistent with the half note), but it's not entirely necessary.

PDS, E Gadd and I were slightly perplexed here, could you elaborate on what you're referring to? Thanks!
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Pianist Da Sootopolis

I looked at it again, and it's really unnecessary. FWIW I think it's ready to go.
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E. Gadd Industries

Righty right! I will update everything when I leave school (incredibly busy morning, alarm didn't go off)!

EDIT: The OP has been updated! Thank you, both TMP and PDS!
"Everyone is crazy but me"
-The Sign Painter


Mfw I help an Italian plumber fall into the abyss while he was shouting something about red coins

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E. Gadd Industries

"Everyone is crazy but me"
-The Sign Painter


Mfw I help an Italian plumber fall into the abyss while he was shouting something about red coins

[close]