[GBC] Pokémon Gold Version & Pokémon Silver Version - "Pokégear Radio: Poké Flute" by Latios212

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Gold Version & Pokémon Silver Version
Console: Game Boy Color
Title: Pokégear Radio: Poké Flute
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212

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[Latios212]

[mastersuperfan]

- Dotted quarter in the right hand in m1 and m9 should be two separate notes, a quarter and an eighth.

- Some slurs in the right hand would be nice.

- Maybe put a cautionary accidental on the F in m8?

- There are a few places where I thought note duration was a bit off, such as the first two beats of the left hand in m5 and m6, which I think should be eighths, not quarters. The right hand in m8 has a half note, not a dotted half, and I think the lower notes in the right hand from m5-m9 (the bloop noises) should all be eighth notes. It would require an extra layer in m7 and m8, though, making it a tad more messy, but I think it'd be better since it's more accurate.

Other than that, seems good.

[Tobbeh99]

- There are a few places where I thought note duration was a bit off, such as the first two beats of the left hand in m5 and m6, which I think should be eighths, not quarters. The right hand in m8 has a half note, not a dotted half, and I think the lower notes in the right hand from m5-m9 (the bloop noises) should all be eighth notes. It would require an extra layer in m7 and m8, though, making it a tad more messy, but I think it'd be better since it's more accurate.

I think some articulations would make those quarter notes better. Like staccato or staccato-tenuto (portato).

[Latios212]

- Dotted quarter in the right hand in m1 and m9 should be two separate notes, a quarter and an eighth.

- Some slurs in the right hand would be nice.

- Maybe put a cautionary accidental on the F in m8?

- There are a few places where I thought note duration was a bit off, such as the first two beats of the left hand in m5 and m6, which I think should be eighths, not quarters. The right hand in m8 has a half note, not a dotted half, and I think the lower notes in the right hand from m5-m9 (the bloop noises) should all be eighth notes. It would require an extra layer in m7 and m8, though, making it a tad more messy, but I think it'd be better since it's more accurate.

Other than that, seems good.

Fixed all of those, thanks!

I think some articulations would make those quarter notes better. Like staccato or staccato-tenuto (portato).

If I left them as quarter notes, you're definitely right, but when I went back to check, they're just plain old eighth notes

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