[DELETED] [GG] Sonic the Hedgehog 2 - "Casino Night Zone" by E. Gadd Industries

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Submission Information:
Series: Sonic
Game: Sonic the Hedgehog 2
Console: Sega Game Gear
Title: Casino Night Zone
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: E. Gadd Industries

[E. Gadd Industries]

[E. Gadd Industries]

Any thoughts?

[Tobbeh99]

2 things:

1) it looks a bit messy. Move some rest and boaden the gap between the staves to make it cleaner. Measure 14 RH in particular. I think you can fix that by just swapping the beam direction, the "red" notes upwards and the "black" downwards.

3) This could fit on 2 pages.

hmm when I look at the mus, I notice that it looks a lot better than the pdf and fits on 2 pages. Maybe start with printing a new pdf.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Ok, I'm confused, does it need to be 2 or 3 pages...?

[Tobbeh99]

ops sry I meant 2, fewer pages.

[E. Gadd Industries]

I was thinking that that was what you meant, but I didn't want to jump the gun.

[E. Gadd Industries]

This, too, has been updated.

[BrainyLucario]

Nice

[JDMEK5]

Your layers are kind of.. a disaster. I'm doing some huge revamping and I'll just send you the new one with a list of what I've changed.

EDIT:
Here's your new file.
And here's the 621-word list in bullet point form explaining what I did and why I did what I did and what I think you can do to take it farther.

[E. Gadd Industries]

...The PDF isn't picking up on my Reader... It stinks anyway. Ummmm.... I managed to save it and everything, but it won't load. Thanks for fixing it up, though!

Edit: After doing some rewiring, I managed to bring light to the PDF. I'm just now beginning to analyze it.

Second Edit: I've analyzed the list, and thanks for doing all that, along with giving more suggestions! I was beginning to think I'd have to bump the topic...

[DonValentino]

Your layers are kind of.. a disaster. I'm doing some huge revamping and I'll just send you the new one with a list of what I've changed.

EDIT:
Here's your new file.
And here's the 621-word list in bullet point form explaining what I did and why I did what I did and what I think you can do to take it farther.

Hoho, nice feedback, very complete indeed. Other things: the size percentage of page 2 is 100 whereas should be 90 to match the rest of the sheet; m. 31 and more like this, don't write a half to the third beat, put two tied quarters instead; the dynamics from m. 33 are a little bit weird and inconsistent, making it just a constant crescendo until the end would be musically better imo.

[JDMEK5]

m. 31 and more like this, don't write a half to the third beat, put two tied quarters instead

Actually I deliberately left that as is. It's not technically correct but everyone does it to the point where it has become acceptable in real world use. It's simpler to most players like that just because of familiarity so personally I would leave it but it's not wrong to change it.

[E. Gadd Industries]

It's almost finished! I had to convert to MuseScore via .XML to fix one or two things, and then I had to send it back, which caused formatting errors that I need to fix. This includes fixing fonts and the like. I should be able to finish edits later on tonight or sometime tomorrow morning.

[E. Gadd Industries]

Concerning Notepad, I can't realign the dotted line to make it tilt, to my knowledge, so it's kinda just "there". I fixed the melody thing, although I had to take the accompaniment in m8 and switch it to the first voice, since it ties from the previous measure. If there's another way around, I'd like to here. I'll upload the link when I get done with community services.