[N64] Yoshi's Story - "Yoshi's Song" by Jegilmer

[jegilmer]

- Changed a couple notes in the left hand on the top of page 2.

Thanks! I didn't realize I missed left out a couple of the chord tones.

- With the help of Latios' genius idea, I fixed up measures 18 & 19.

Looks good! However, just out of curiosity, why did you guys decide to make the triplet line in m. 18 into 2 voices?

- The beaming was way off in measures 32 & 33. I also moved the notes down for playability reasons.
- Measure 36 was a problem.

Yeah I don't know the correct way to notate dotted eighth note beaming groups.

However, I still think m. 36 should have maybe a forte piano because in the original composition, it sounds like there is a dynamic change there.

[jegilmer]

Having at in the original would be problematic, but one octave up from what you currently have would be fine.

Also: Jegilmer, can we help edit files in the OP for you? (Just in general, not just this sub.)

Yeah I agree, the two lines would intersect way to much to have it where I originally had it.

And yes that would be perfectly fine with me!

[Sebastian]

Looks good! However, just out of curiosity, why did you guys decide to make the triplet line in m. 18 into 2 voices?

So it doesn't look messy.

However, I still think m. 36 should have maybe a piano forte because in the original composition, it sounds like there is a dynamic change there.

I agree.

Yeah I agree, the two lines would intersect way to much to have it where I originally had it.

And yes that would be perfectly fine with me!

Here are the updated links with the forte and that section one octave higher.
[MUS] [PDF]

[jegilmer]

Thanks for all of the help! I updated the links for this submission as well.

[Latios212]

Un-beam the tremolo in measure 31.

[jegilmer]

I don't think I have that ability with Finale Notepad :/

[Latios212]

Better now. Check OP.

@Sebastian: Key wasn't fixed until I did it just now.

[Bespinben]

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