[GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Doopliss' Theme" by Jegilmer

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Doopliss' Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Jegilmer

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[jegilmer]

I only have Finale Notepad, so my MUS file is actually XML import from Sibelius. If someone could tidy it up that would be great. The arrangement itself is pretty accurate.

Here is the video:

[jegilmer]

What I know needs improvement however, is the note beaming/grouping.

[jegilmer]

I still need some feedback on this submission whenever someone gets the chance

[FireArrow]

I'd go over the formatting guidelines and fix those notes on top of the tempo marking before worrying about anything.

[mastersuperfan]

I only have Finale Notepad, so my MUS file is actually XML import from Sibelius. If someone could tidy it up that would be great. The arrangement itself is pretty accurate.

[FireArrow]

He can still edit the text boxes in finale notepad and move around notes.

[mastersuperfan]

Mmk, my bad then, I didn't check the arrangement itself.

[jegilmer]

Actually, for some reason my version of Notepad will only let me move the title and the composer. I'm not sure why. If I could make the score look better I would, but I cannot.

[Sebastian]

Here is draft 1.
I'd like to see what others think.....this is a hard song 
https://www.dropbox.com/s/dv2cli7pwde74sw/Doopliss%27%20Theme.mus?dl=1

I mostly fixed formatting and did some other note beaming and note additions.
Thoughts anyone?

[jegilmer]

Looks good to me! We'll see what some of the moderators think though.

Thanks for making the arrangement up to par with the guidelines MLF!

[jegilmer]

The MUS and PDF have been updated.

[jegilmer]

Can we get some final feedback on this arrangement?

[Tobbeh99]

Maybe add some of the bass notes/drum noice (or whatever sound that is) in the LH, in the part before the repeat when the 16th runs kicks in, to make the LH not empty.

[jegilmer]

Okay, I know what you're talking about! That's a good idea.