[DELETED] [3DS] Pokémon Super Mystery Dungeon - "Partner's Theme: Music Box" by Zeila

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Super Mystery Dungeon
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Partner's Theme: Music Box
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Zeila

[Zeila]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rbp0jU-byTc

[mastersuperfan]

I'll take a look at it now.

I would've checked it earlier, but

Post-game

I just want to get my partner back as soon as I can ;_;

[close]

Alright, my feedback:

- Put the repeat sign on the first measure, not the pickup measure. Put the pickup notes in the very last measure.

- Change the pickup measure's length so that it's only an eighth note long and the eighth rest isn't there.

- Transpose the left hand up an octave. There will be times when the hands will overlap, but as it is, the chords in the left hand provide a muddy texture, very unlike a music box. Transposing it up will not only make it sound better but be more accurate to the original.

- First two notes in m18 are wrong; it should be D Eb, not Eb Bb. This mistake also seems to be present in m22.

- I think some of the chords need revision, though I'm really the last person you should ask for chords.

[Tobbeh99]

I think you should put both RH and LH one octave higher. I think it will sound more "like a music box" that way.

[FireArrow]

Double check your chords, I'm hearing some chord extensions that your not including.

[Zeila]

Thanks for the feedback! I went ahead and updated it again, so if there anymore mistakes just tell me. If you specify a general spot, that would be better, but if it's throughout the whole piece then I'll look at it again too

[Zeila]

2nd page bump

About the pickup measure, is there a way to get rid of the overlapping rest or do I have to make a new file and copy and paste?

[mastersuperfan]

Document > Pickup Measure

[Zeila]

Thanks! I went ahead and updated it again

[Zeila]

I changed the clef back to a regular treble clef and added an 8va on top of the right hand (also 2nd page bump)

[Zeila]

2nd page bump

[mastersuperfan]

added an 8va on top of the right hand

Not allowed, I believe.

[Altissimo]

Not allowed, I believe.

No, I think that's acceptable. I've gotten sheets with that on before.

[Zeila]

Not allowed, I believe.

If it's not allowed, then am I only supposed to just note that the performer should play the right hand an octave higher (and possibly keep the midi file the way it is)? I'll leave it alone for now since Altissimo said that some of her sheets have been accepted like that, but if anyone else has anything to add about that then go ahead

[mastersuperfan]

No, I think that's acceptable. I've gotten sheets with that on before.

I misread it, whoops.