[PC] Undertale - "Dating Tense!" by mastersuperfan

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Dating Tense!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan

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[mastersuperfan]

"Logic and Pasta"

I'm sure it could use a lot of polishing, since I did this pretty quickly. Also, I can't come up with a clever tempo expression. .-.

[Nebbles]

A clever tempo expression could be "Like someone with standards"

[Sebastian]

Excellent job with this song!
Some feedback:
- I would recommend some staccatos in the left hand. I'll leave it up to you where to put them.
- In M. 4, 8, & 12, you can just break those ties since those notes are short in the original anyway.

[mastersuperfan]

Edited!

I still feel like m9 and m10 look a little odd. Any other feedback?

[Sebastian]

I'll take a thorough look tomorrow. I only took a quick look today.

[mastersuperfan]

Le bump?

[Sebastian]

Sorry XD
I'll take a look this afternoon.

[mastersuperfan]

Le rebump

[Tobbeh99]

Nice arrangement!

2 things I noticed that could be better.

-This arrangement could fit on 1 page. Resize the page down to maybe 85-87% or so using the page Layout tool and then drag the measures to page 1.

-Measure 9-12: I think it would be better to have 8th notes one octave higher, as they are in the original.

[mastersuperfan]

Nice arrangement!

2 things I noticed that could be better.

-This arrangement could fit on 1 page. Resize the page down to maybe 85-87% or so using the page Layout tool and then drag the measures to page 1.

-Measure 9-12: I think it would be better to have 8th notes one octave higher, as they are in the original.

In that case, though, the player won't be able to hold out the D# (unless they have abnormally large hands). Would it be better just to let go of the D# and go up? Or maybe switch the notes up an octave only after the D# is released?

[Tobbeh99]

Yes I thought about that, and you're right that it would be difficult to hold that D# throughtout the measure if you make it one octave higher. But also if you keep them as they are the you restrike that D# as the second note and later on as well. And also being in the same octave makes less like a "different counter melody-thing". So either option has it's flaw, I let you decide.

[Bespinben]

All the F naturals in this piece should be respelled as E#. This is because they are functioning as raised 6th in G# minor, derived from the parallel dorian mode.

[mastersuperfan]

Updated! I'm not very good with enharmonic spellings (and it really doesn't help that I happen to be arranging a few themes with a plethora of them).

[Bespinben]

You can easily fit this one page with 5 systems total (measure distribution as 2, 2, 3, 3, 2) if you re-size the page to 90% and adjust the left margin slightly wider.