[GCN] Luigi's Mansion - "Main Theme" (Replacement) by mariolegofan

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Luigi's Mansion
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Main Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Sebastian]

The one on site is trash
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EHQ43ObPMHQ

[SlowPokemon]

You have no articulations, and some of your phrasing doesn't match the original. Try to make sure that if a note is staccato in the original, for instance, you notate that, and don't have a slur over notes that should have a break in them somewhere.

[Sebastian]

Could you elaborate on where? I don't see anything odd.

[Sebastian]

I actually have all the staccatos I want. I noticed there could be a few more in the left hand. How's it look now? (Links in OP updated)

[Sebastian]

Any Updaters have anything to add?

[Sebastian]

Any Updaters have anything to add?

[Sebastian]

Bump

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This submission has been accepted by Bespinben.

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