[PC] Undertale - "Menu (Full)" by Enaryok

Started by Zeta, November 11, 2015, 11:07:47 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Menu (Full)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Enaryok

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Sebastian

#1
Enaryok and I went over this one prior to submission. I didn't check the notes yet.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=brP9Q08kEfk





Enaryok

I just saw about adding a link to the original, here it is:

[ youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=brP9Q08kEfk[ /youtube]


Got dunked on by mariolegofan! :O

Sebastian

lol
That's ok!
Btw, you don't need to put this [ youtube ][/youtube ]. Just put the link and the video will appear when you post the post. :P



Enaryok

Quote from: mariolegofan on November 11, 2015, 01:42:11 PMBtw, you don't need to put this [ youtube ][/youtube ]. Just put the link and the video will appear when you post the post. :P

The more I know =D
And thanks again for the help ^^

Sebastian

Ok. Now that I got a chance to look at the notes, here is some final feedback:

- The octaves aren't in the original and aren't really that necessary. I'd remove them.
- There is a harmony part that you left out. I see you have it the second time through which is correct! It should also be the first time through as well.
- In measures 9-12, the right hand is one octave higher than you have written.

Other than this stuff, looks excellent!
To save you time, here is a musx. I noticed that you are a Finale 2014 user :P: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ezq7gkjla2iuihq/093%20-%20Menu%20%28Full%29.musx?dl=1

If you have any questions or disagreement, please tell me!



Enaryok

Thanks for the edit, I've still a lot to learn about harmonics, octaves were part of my poor try at it (I hope I can improve this while arranging Undertale songs). I didn't put the same on first and second line to add a bit of diversity, and also to see from reactions if one was too far from the original (still the doubts on "how to chords").

I'm reuploading it right now!

Bespinben

The melody actually is doubled at the octave -- listen for the glockenspiel. That said, I like how you have it currently, so don't sweat it. It's just good to know what ingredients you have when making your arrangement soup.

Measures 1-4 and 5-8 are identical, so I'd recommend adding a repeat sign.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

Sebastian

Quote from: Bespinben on November 13, 2015, 12:09:22 PMMeasures 1-4 and 5-8 are identical, so I'd recommend adding a repeat sign.
I beg to differ. I'm personally not a big fan of repeats unless their at the end of the piece or put in to save page space/cut down number of pages.
But you're the boss ;)



Bespinben

1.) Extra systems means extra reading. The inattentive pianist may not realize that they are identical, and may spend unnecessary time memorizing two of the same thing.

2.) The scaled-down version of this song was formatted similarly (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7740.0), so having a repeat on one and not the other doesn't make much sense.
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

Sebastian

Quote from: Bespinben on November 13, 2015, 12:30:36 PM1.) Extra systems means extra reading. The inattentive pianist may not realize that they are identical, and may spend unnecessary time memorizing two of the same thing.
...ok

Quote from: Bespinben on November 13, 2015, 12:30:36 PM2.) The scaled-down version of this song was formatted similarly (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7740.0), so having a repeat on one and not the other doesn't make much sense.
Good point.



braix

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Enaryok

#12
I'll add a repeat and reupload it, thanks for the feedback. For octaves, MLF suggested me to not add them (earlier in the topic).

EDIT: Done!

Sebastian

The glockenspiel that Bespinben noted is in there is not an octave away from the melody. It's like 2 or 3 octaves higher.



Enaryok

Quote from: mariolegofan on November 14, 2015, 06:16:23 AMThe glockenspiel that Bespinben noted is in there is not an octave away from the melody. It's like 2 or 3 octaves higher.

Oh, I misread.