[PC] Undertale - "Menu (Full)" by Enaryok

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Menu (Full)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Enaryok

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[Sebastian]

Enaryok and I went over this one prior to submission. I didn't check the notes yet.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=brP9Q08kEfk

[Enaryok]

I just saw about adding a link to the original, here it is:

[ youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=brP9Q08kEfk[ /youtube]

Got dunked on by mariolegofan! :O

[Sebastian]

lol
That's ok!
Btw, you don't need to put this [ youtube ][/youtube ]. Just put the link and the video will appear when you post the post.

[Enaryok]

Btw, you don't need to put this [ youtube ][/youtube ]. Just put the link and the video will appear when you post the post.

The more I know =D
And thanks again for the help ^^

[Sebastian]

Ok. Now that I got a chance to look at the notes, here is some final feedback:

- The octaves aren't in the original and aren't really that necessary. I'd remove them.
- There is a harmony part that you left out. I see you have it the second time through which is correct! It should also be the first time through as well.
- In measures 9-12, the right hand is one octave higher than you have written.

Other than this stuff, looks excellent!
To save you time, here is a musx. I noticed that you are a Finale 2014 user : https://www.dropbox.com/s/ezq7gkjla2iuihq/093%20-%20Menu%20%28Full%29.musx?dl=1

If you have any questions or disagreement, please tell me!

[Enaryok]

Thanks for the edit, I've still a lot to learn about harmonics, octaves were part of my poor try at it (I hope I can improve this while arranging Undertale songs). I didn't put the same on first and second line to add a bit of diversity, and also to see from reactions if one was too far from the original (still the doubts on "how to chords").

I'm reuploading it right now!

[Bespinben]

The melody actually is doubled at the octave -- listen for the glockenspiel. That said, I like how you have it currently, so don't sweat it. It's just good to know what ingredients you have when making your arrangement soup.

Measures 1-4 and 5-8 are identical, so I'd recommend adding a repeat sign.

[Sebastian]

Measures 1-4 and 5-8 are identical, so I'd recommend adding a repeat sign.

I beg to differ. I'm personally not a big fan of repeats unless their at the end of the piece or put in to save page space/cut down number of pages.
But you're the boss

[Bespinben]

1.) Extra systems means extra reading. The inattentive pianist may not realize that they are identical, and may spend unnecessary time memorizing two of the same thing.

2.) The scaled-down version of this song was formatted similarly (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7740.0), so having a repeat on one and not the other doesn't make much sense.

[Sebastian]

1.) Extra systems means extra reading. The inattentive pianist may not realize that they are identical, and may spend unnecessary time memorizing two of the same thing.

...ok

2.) The scaled-down version of this song was formatted similarly (http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=7740.0), so having a repeat on one and not the other doesn't make much sense.

Good point.

[braix]

Extra systems means extra reading.

And nobody likes reading

[Enaryok]

I'll add a repeat and reupload it, thanks for the feedback. For octaves, MLF suggested me to not add them (earlier in the topic).

EDIT: Done!

[Sebastian]

The glockenspiel that Bespinben noted is in there is not an octave away from the melody. It's like 2 or 3 octaves higher.

[Enaryok]

The glockenspiel that Bespinben noted is in there is not an octave away from the melody. It's like 2 or 3 octaves higher.

Oh, I misread.