[GB] Final Fantasy Legend II - "The Tranquil Earth" by FireArrow

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Final Fantasy
Game: Final Fantasy Legend II
Console: Game Boy
Title: The Tranquil Earth
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: FireArrow

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[FireArrow]

Trying to figure out which is the correct title atm.
Edit: https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/final-fantasy-legend-ii-original/id160214515
bleh, I'll change it now

[Sebastian]

Sweet Job!
Some feedback:
- Might I recommend you use the reverse stem tool on the 4th eighth note in measure 11.
- Also, NinSheetMusic.org

Again, Great Job!

[FireArrow]

Some feedback:
- Might I recommend you use the reverse stem tool on the 4th eighth note in measure 11.
- Also, NinSheetMusic.org

Oh yeah, we have a new url... (alt+shift+up is beautiful btw, I wish I'd of known about it sooner.)

[Bespinben]

Add a measure at the end of the sheet, and either sustain the tonic chord into it, or leave it blank and write "let ring". This will preserve the hypermeter that you've carefully adhered to throughout the sheet until there.

[FireArrow]

Huh, I wouldn't of thought to do that. Thanks.

[Bespinben]

This is literally 1 step away from being perfect:

*Account for voice preservation at m. 8 and m. 20. Always show each of the 3 voices in some fashion.

[FireArrow]

Gotcha

[Bespinben]

You showed separate layers, but stem direction and the positioning of rests is just as crucial.

1.) M. 7-8:



2.) M. 19-20

[FireArrow]

Ah ok, done.

Also, how do you take pictures like that? Do you just print screen, crop it, then file share?

[Bespinben]

Snipping Tool, mah boi.

[Zeta]

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