[GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Enemy Battle" (Replacement) by JesterMusician

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Enemy Battle
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: JesterMusician


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Sebastian]

So many TTYD songs.....I love it

Btw, awesome work with this song!
Some feedback:
- Don't forget the title on page 2.
- There is some clashing with the dynamics and notes.
- I feel silly for saying this, but there is a / at the end of the url.
- This song is actually a replacement of "Enemy Battle" (the correct name is
"Battle Theme" which is what you have.) You might wanna get that updated.

Other than this stuff, it looks pretty awesome! Excellent work!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VRXKF3lMh8k

[JesterMusician]

Fixed all of the points you mentioned. The second page title isn't mentioned in the style guide though...I'm sure I've submitted sheets that lack it.

[Sebastian]

The second page title isn't mentioned in the style guide though

Hmmmm.....that should be updated.

[Sebastian]

- You still have the fortissimo clashing with the crescendo in measure 19
- Also, might I recommend that you move the mf in measure 20 to measure 2 with parenthesis around it.

[Bespinben]

The second page title isn't mentioned in the style guide though...I'm sure I've submitted sheets that lack it.

Hmmmm.....that should be updated.

2nd page title is just a Finale default. It's not mandatory. Looking at the majority of published sheet music both modern and classical, I would say NSM is in the minority for favoring this practice.

- You still have the fortissimo clashing with the crescendo in measure 19
- Also, might I recommend that you move the mf in measure 20 to measure 2 with parenthesis around it.

-The PDF does not have any clashing dynamics. Sometimes you have to twerk things in the MUS to get Finale's PDF export to look right. This is why I use external PDF "printers" instead of the built-in one.

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