[GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Twilight Town" by mariolegofan

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Twilight Town
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan

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[Sebastian]

Olimar and I looked over this one a looooong time ago on tinychat.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aSA6dfz6BEY

[Latios212]

Make sure the layers fully overlap where they do - you have extra natural signs in 11, 12, 15. In measure 9, make the D's overlap.
Some more helpful hand indication in measure 17 would be nice.

[Sebastian]

Make sure the layers fully overlap where they do - you have extra natural signs in 11, 12, 15. In measure 9, make the D's overlap.
Some more helpful hand indication in measure 17 would be nice.

Fixed.


Oh darn.....I forgot pedal marks too. Fixed that also.

[Olimar12345]

Also, I'd suggest removing the high B in measure 17 (since you won't be pedaling there anyway) and move everything to layer one.

[Sebastian]

Fixed

[Olimar12345]

the 8va markings are closer to the bottom staff above them than the staff below. Move them down closer to the music they pertain to (Measures 9 to the end).

[Sebastian]

Fixed

[Olimar12345]

Good.

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