[GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Level Up!" by Bloop

Started by Zeta, October 23, 2015, 04:05:12 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Level Up!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Bloop

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Bloop


Sebastian

Excellent work!

Feedback:
- Instead of a comma between the names of the composers, I'd put an ampersand.
- Also, put the second composer on the next line. When the composer name(s) start to creep under the subtitle, it's best to put them on separate lines.
- Those notes look to cramped in the first system. I'd shrink the page size to 90% and then make the systems 2 3 3 3 instead of 3 4 4.



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Bloop

Quote from: mariolegofan on October 23, 2015, 11:03:21 AM- Instead of a comma between the names of the composers, I'd put an ampersand.
- Also, put the second composer on the next line. When the composer name(s) start to creep under the subtitle, it's best to put them on separate lines.
- Those notes look to cramped in the first system. I'd shrink the page size to 90% and then make the systems 2 3 3 3 instead of 3 4 4.
- I've always used a comma, so I always will.
- Done!
- Done!

Sebastian




Bespinben

Solid.

*Re-check your transcription of m. 7 beat 4 (left hand)
*M. 11 beat 4 is a Dbmaj7 chord, so it should be spelled (and arranged) as such
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Zeta

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