[GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Level Up!" by Bloop

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Level Up!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Bloop

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[Bloop]

Original:

[Sebastian]

Excellent work!

Feedback:
- Instead of a comma between the names of the composers, I'd put an ampersand.
- Also, put the second composer on the next line. When the composer name(s) start to creep under the subtitle, it's best to put them on separate lines.
- Those notes look to cramped in the first system. I'd shrink the page size to 90% and then make the systems 2 3 3 3 instead of 3 4 4.

[Latios212]

those darned Pno. markings

[Bloop]

- Instead of a comma between the names of the composers, I'd put an ampersand.
- Also, put the second composer on the next line. When the composer name(s) start to creep under the subtitle, it's best to put them on separate lines.
- Those notes look to cramped in the first system. I'd shrink the page size to 90% and then make the systems 2 3 3 3 instead of 3 4 4.

- I've always used a comma, so I always will.
- Done!
- Done!

[Sebastian]

Beautiful!

[Bespinben]

Solid.

*Re-check your transcription of m. 7 beat 4 (left hand)
*M. 11 beat 4 is a Dbmaj7 chord, so it should be spelled (and arranged) as such

[Bloop]

Fixed!

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