[PC] Undertale - "Snowy" by Nebbles

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Undertale
Console: PC
Title: Snowy
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Nebbles

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[Sebastian]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8BIeGdBjJiU

Very good!
I few things I noticed:
- In Measures 1, 2, 5, 6, 9, 10, 13, & 14 (left hand), you have an additional note which I don't hear in the original, E. Since you have 2 note chords everywhere else, it might be best consistency-wise to take those Es out.
- In Measure 19, 20, & 23 (both hands), change all the flats in this section to sharps. I'm hearing an F# sharp minor progression through this section meaning that all the Dbs should be C#s (and the Gb should be an F# in measure 20).
-The last system seems a little squished, I'm not sure what to do about this...

Again, excellent work!

[Latios212]

IT'S HEEEERE

[Nebbles]

All right, I'll get working on those over the week.

[Oronoco]

I like this so much 

See what you think about putting 4 measures per system, having ~3 systems on the second page, and resizing to ~95% to fill in the white space. I think it looks good that way, but I can see how you might really like having it all on one page.

Think about making the rest on beats 1 and 2 in measure 23 the same as the rests on beats 1 and 2 in measure 21.

Also, I like your tempo marking!

[Nebbles]

Thanks! I prefer having it all one page, so I'll probably keep it that way.

[Oronoco]

That makes sense. 

[Sebastian]

Also, you can make the page size as small as 80% "legally." I think Olimar told me once that you shouldn't go smaller than 80%.

[Olimar12345]

Eh don't go below 85%.

[Sebastian]

Also, you can make the page size as small as 80% "legally." I think Olimar told me once that you shouldn't go smaller than 80%.

Whoops this is what I mean't. That comma & "t" didn't make it from my brain to my finger lol.

[Nebbles]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8BIeGdBjJiU

Very good!
I few things I noticed:
- In Measures 1, 2, 5, 6, 9, 10, 13, & 14 (left hand), you have an additional note which I don't hear in the original, E. Since you have 2 note chords everywhere else, it might be best consistency-wise to take those Es out.
- In Measure 19, 20, & 23 (both hands), change all the flats in this section to sharps. I'm hearing an F# sharp minor progression through this section meaning that all the Dbs should be C#s (and the Gb should be an F# in measure 20).
-The last system seems a little squished, I'm not sure what to do about this...

Again, excellent work!

Should measures 21 and 22 also have the sharp to flat transition, or no? I was working on it earlier this morning.

[Sebastian]

Sorry, I wasn't very clear about that

Measures 21 and 22 center around an Eb 7th chord. So it's cool the way it is 👍

[Nebbles]

Gotcha. All right, I've made all edits, so when I get home I'll upload the corrections! :J

[Bespinben]

Nebbles and I finalized the engraving for this arrangement:
[MUS] [MIDI] [PDF] [MUSX]

...even made a spiffy re-mastered audio version:
[MP3]

-The last system seems a little squished, I'm not sure what to do about this...

If you read this MLF, what I did to fix this was I noticed I could eliminate 2 measures from the sheet by adding a 1st and 2nd ending during the first 8 measures. This allowed me to evenly distribute 4 measures to each system.

[Latios212]

That tempo marking...