[3DS] Animal Crossing: Happy Home Designer - "Interior Designing" by Dude

[Sebastian]

*snip*

[Dude]

And I'm not submitting it

Married to Mashi, Dude! - Today 3:37 PM
> MLF if you fix my sheet I'm not submitting it

Married to Mashi, Dude! - Today 3:37 PM
> I don't want your help

Married to Mashi, Dude! - Today 3:37 PM
> Leave me alone

[Sebastian]

?

Why? I did this only:

I agree with both of these comments, however the slurs are up to you. In addition to these things, here are the remaining things that need tweaking:

-The whole note in measure 17 (RH) should be a dotted half note followed by a quarter rest. There is a silence between that held note and the next entrance.
-The G# in measure 21 should be an Ab.
-The A# in measure 25 should be a Bb.
-Both C naturals in measure 28 should be B#'s.
-The D# in measure 29 should be an Eb.
-The A# in measure 30 should be a Bb.
-I would suggest removing the staccato markings from the quarter notes on beats two and three of measure 26. Those two notes should be played the same as the third, and all three should be the same as the notes that follow in measure 28.

Make these changes and you'll be good! I love it!

[Dude]

What don't you get by

Also MLF, can you like... not post in my threads?

Also please remove it from your post.

[Sebastian]

Fine. All you have to do is tell me.

[Dude]

Also please remove the sheet from your post.

[Dude]

I'll do it myself when I get home.

[Olimar12345]

@mlf:

I have told you this several times privately in the past, please just let the updaters do their jobs.

That said, I look forward to seeing this one finished, Dude!

[Dude]

updated and here's an rendered mp3 with a vst i have if anyone wants it :3

http://www.mediafire.com/listen/v0b1mnw1822b9x2/Interior_Designing.mp3

[Olimar12345]

It's beautiful! One last thing, though: the C naturals in measure 29 were correct, but you made them B#'s D: revert them back and we'll be set!

Edit: also, about this:

-The whole note in measure 17 (RH) should be a dotted half note followed by a quarter rest. There is a silence between that held note and the next entrance.

Don't forget the quarter rest! And go ahead and do this to the left hand too.

[Dude]

updated and uploaded

also, any chance for some feedback on my other one?

[Olimar12345]

Good work!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Olimar12345.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot