The UNOFFICIAL Undertale Arrangement Project

[braix]

*ahem* If everyone could please look at the top post and make sure everyone's claims and music sheets are correct. (minus the "Undertale" mixup)

I can confirm that almost all of mine were put up there.
You can put the link to my In Progress stuff by the way

[ThePopStarDude]

Mine are correct.

[Nebbles]

I'm good, as I only did one song.

[Yugi]

All of mine are right.

[Yugi]

NGAHHH is done.

[Enaryok]

Claims are okay for me. Btw, am I in comic sans? I'll keep some bad puns for later then... =P

For now, here's the Start Menu, I'll do the full menu later but I want to know if the formatting and all is okay. The MIDI file sound strange on my Winamp, but I think it's my poor computer performance, since it's all good in Finale.

002 - Start Menu
EDIT: Dropbox .zip link

[Sebastian]

Great!

Announcement: I have gotten permission to review all the songs for this project in hopes that we will get an update! I am going to pm each one of the arrangers with the feedback before posting here to save time and/or problems. I would post the pms here to keep everyone in the loop, but posting pms is against the rules.
For example: I pmed Dino asking him for permission to edit his arrangement. He pms back saying yes. I pm the edited versions. He oks it or points out what he doesn't like etc.
Then I post it here.
Will be working on it ASAP! One more thing: I won't edit anyone's arrangement without getting their permission first.

[Yug_Guy]

NGAHHH is done.

002 - Start Menu

Uh... do you guys mind if you link these via Dropbox? Also Enaryok, could you maybe post it as either .mus/.midi/.pdf separately or as one big .zip folder?

[Enaryok]

Sure, I'll reupload on Dropbox in a .zip and not a .rar. It'll also contain .musx file. I'll edit this post with the link.

EDIT: 02 - Start Menu : Dropbox .zip link

[Sebastian]

Ok!
Here is some feedback on Dino's "Your Best Friend."
- According to the The Formatting Guidelines, it is required to have at least one dynamic in each sheet to set the mood, to borrow the colloquialism.
- The melody in Measures 5-12 is much to high throughout most of the piece. An 8va would do nicely.
- I highly recommend slurs on places like the eighth notes in Measure 6, for example. The eighth notes in measures 5, 6, 7, 9, 10, & 11. Also, slurs on the grace notes.
- Instead of putting the measure distribution as 5, 5, 2, it would be much better if it was 4, 4, 4.
- In Measure 12 (both hands), the Gb should be an F#.
- You don't need a repeat at the beginning of the piece. The repeat at the end will imply that you go to the beginning.

Other than this stuff excellent job!
To save you time, here is an edited version with the changes I listed above:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/6p5qszm83oru681/Undertale%20-%20Your%20Best%20Friend.mus?dl=1

If you have any questions or disagreements, please tell me!

I already sent this to Dino in a pm^
He agrees with this. Could we get this link in the OP?

[Yug_Guy]

I already sent this to Dino in a pm^
He agrees with this. Could we get this link in the OP?

Done. If you wanted to post more than one updated sheet at a time, I could update a large portion of the OP at once.

EDIT: Just finished with Alphys.

[Sebastian]

If you wanted to post more than one updated sheet at a time, I could update a large portion of the OP at once.

I have to wait for the arranger to get back to me after I send him the feedback.

[Yug_Guy]

I have to wait for the arranger to get back to me after I send him the feedback.

Yes, but I don't need to edit the links immediately. You can always wait until you have a few piled up before sending them my way.

[Sebastian]

The arranger (Enaryok) and I went over "Start Menu"
https://www.dropbox.com/s/788x2zv8eybbdk3/002%20-%20Undertale%20-%20Start%20Menu%20-%20Enaryok.mus?dl=1

[Sebastian]

Feedback for "Enemy Approaching" by BespinBen.
- I know you have a dang good reason for this, but why do you have C#s instead of Dbs in measures 1 & 2? And why Gbs instead of F#s in measures 27 & 31?
- Also, the image is copyrighted and isn't allowed on the main site.