[DELETED] [GB] Kirby's Dream Land - "King Dedede" by AwesomeYears

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Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Dream Land
Console: Game Boy
Title: King Dedede
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: AwesomeYears

[AwesomeYears]

I removed the semiquaver runs for easier playing. Original can be found in my Arrangement thingy.

http://forum.ninsheetmusic.org/index.php?topic=6685.0

[Tobbeh99]

Good job!
I took some time cleaning it up a bit here it is:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/24842881/King%20Dedede.zip

[Latios212]

Looking good! I'd prefer 8-measure systems so it'd fit on one page though. It's way too spaced out.

(awesomeyears love your file name)

[Tobbeh99]

And that is fixed with only one button click, almost actually.

Here is the new one, looks a lot better with 8 measure/system:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/24842881/King%20Dedede.zip

[Olimar12345]

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[AwesomeYears]

Edited the post with Tobbeh's changes, thanks!

(awesomeyears love your file name)

King DayDayDay is perfect DayDayDay

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Whoops, this file was before I discovered it.

[Olimar12345]

Please edit the dynamics to only have one between the staves. (My educated guess is that Tobbeh added those in...) You can have separate dynamics, but in this instance it is unnecessary. so basically:

-Move the mp at mm5 above that staff
-remove the mp at mm9
-remove the mf at mm25

@Tobbeh: it isn't necessary to always put two dynamics, one per hand, each time you want to change them. It's implied, as a pianist, that you bring out the melody over the accompaniment.

[Olimar12345]

Bump?

This one is pretty close

[AwesomeYears]

Argh, give me one more day and it'll be set.

[AwesomeYears]

OK, fixed.

[Olimar12345]

yesh! several more things:

-I'm fairly certain that the Bb in the LH at the beginning starts on beat one, take another listen.
-Remove the lower notes from the chords in the RH of measures 3-4, since those aren't in the original.
-I propose that you move the LH down an octave from 25 to the end, since that voice is in that register.
-You've got some Copy/pasta errors towards the end of the piece. LH of mm.36 SHOULD be in 37, and measure 36 should be the same as measure 35.
-The second grouping of eighth notes in the RH of measure 36 is beamed upwards for some reason. Mind flipping that?
-The D in measure 14 (RH) needs to be a Bb below that. This also needs to be corrected at measure 30 where that repeats up the octave.
-The Composer and Arranger names need to be Right-Aligned!

[Tobbeh99]

I was the one editing measure 3,4. And after slowing down the song, I am very sure all those notes are there.

[Olimar12345]

Found a better quality recording, you're right:

So yeah, leave that in, but do those other things I said!

EDIT: The Composer and Arranger names need to be Right-Aligned!

[Olimar12345]

Bumping this back up to the top before it gets lost among the new ones. If you would like, I can make the necessary changes for you so that it may be accepted.