[NDS] Pokémon Diamond/Pearl/Platinum - "Route 209 (Day)" (Replacement) by TheMarioPianist

[TheMarioPianist]

Nah, I think that's about as far I can take you.

Yep, thank you for your help! Now, we play the waiting game for Ben, Olimar, or Don. (Since Latios waits for one of them to approve first.)

[TheMarioPianist]

Not letting myself fall to the bottom again!






Bump.

[TheMarioPianist]

Bump. Bump-bump. Bump-badadabump-bump.

Bum-bum-bummmm, bump-bump-bump-ba-dum-ba-bump, bump-bump-ba-dum-ba-bump-bump-bump!

I tried.

[Olimar12345]

Things to fix:
-Your triplets in the LH at the beginning are stemmed down for some reason.
-Change the LH part at measure 35 to have the upper octave A as an eighth note, followed by the lower A as another eighth note, tied to a dotted half note to finish the measure off.
-Then, change the LH of measure 36 to begin with just the lower A as a dotted half note (tied from the previous measure) followed by a quarter note, the A an octave higher.
-Change the dotted quarter note in measure 39 (LH) to a quarter note and an eighth rest.
-Literally delete everything in the LH at measure 40. That measure is silent in the original .-.
-Make the last quarter note in measure 41 (LH) only an A. (remove the two upper voices)
-Change both of the chords in measure 42 (LH) to E's in the staff.
-In the next section, (starting at mm. 43) the bass voice is almost completely incorrect. You have like way more than is in the original. Below I have revised the entire pieces' left hand part. Please compare it to your version to fully understand what I am talking about.

[MUS] [PDF]

Other than that, it is a lovely and nostalgic arrangement, good work.

[TheMarioPianist]

Things to fix:
-Your triplets in the LH at the beginning are stemmed down for some reason.
-Change the LH part at measure 35 to have the upper octave A as an eighth note, followed by the lower A as another eighth note, tied to a dotted half note to finish the measure off.
-Then, change the LH of measure 36 to begin with just the lower A as a dotted half note (tied from the previous measure) followed by a quarter note, the A an octave higher.
-Change the dotted quarter note in measure 39 (LH) to a quarter note and an eighth rest.
-Literally delete everything in the LH at measure 40. That measure is silent in the original .-.
-Make the last quarter note in measure 41 (LH) only an A. (remove the two upper voices)
-Change both of the chords in measure 42 (LH) to E's in the staff.
-In the next section, (starting at mm. 43) the bass voice is almost completely incorrect. You have like way more than is in the original. Below I have revised the entire pieces' left hand part. Please compare it to your version to fully understand what I am talking about.

[MUS] [PDF]

Other than that, it is a lovely and nostalgic arrangement, good work.

Lovely and nostalgic, I like! Ok, I think I covered all your stuff. Let me know if I missed anything. And yea, I agreed with all of it. Most of it was just some extra stuff I added to make the song fuller. That's just my style sometimes; to put in extra notes. Thanks for catching them!

[TheMarioPianist]

Bump bc page 2

[Oronoco]

This is such a cool arrangement. You chose a great Pokémon piece!

You might toss the middle C and D in Measure 3 into the right hand. It makes the left hand happier and sets up the right hand, too.

vvv My left hand really liked grabbing some of the RH notes in Measures 27 and 28. That's completely optional, though, so see what you think!

[TheMarioPianist]

This is such a cool arrangement. You chose a great Pokémon piece!

You might toss the middle C and D in Measure 3 into the right hand. It makes the left hand happier and sets up the right hand, too.

vvv My left hand really liked grabbing some of the RH notes in Measures 27 and 28. That's completely optional, though, so see what you think!

First point: Huh. I could've sworn that I moved those. If I had gotten it accepted that way, RIP left hands everywhere .

Second point: I agree with that too. Two 2 note chords are much better than 4 note ones. Thanks for catching those; will be updated momentarily!

[TheMarioPianist]

Files updated!

[Olimar12345]

rit. should go above the staff, not under. Move this and we're done here.

[TheMarioPianist]

We're done here.

[Olimar12345]

we're done here.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Olimar12345.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot