[PC] Rogue Legacy - "Castle (Traits Menu)" by McDucky

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Rogue Legacy
Console: PC
Title: Castle (Traits Menu)
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: McDucky

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[Bespinben]

Seeing as the below is the official OST title, it is expedient that you update the title of your submission.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eY4_tcoCkYg

[AwesomeYears]

Woo change the NinSheetMusic URL to ze new one.

[Sebastian]

Nice Job!
I have a few things:
- It is actually in 6/8 at 65 BPM (Dotted Quarter Note = 65). It has that 2/4 feel and has those triplets everywhere. So you'll have to cut everything in half. Example: Make the half notes Quarters etc.
-The URL info is incorrect. It should be "Cellar Door Games (c) 2013" Traditionally, you put the developer & publisher. If I'm wrong, someone correct me. Also the url is http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/

Other then that, excellent work!

[McDucky]

I updated the score, title and footer.

[Sebastian]

Ok:
Here is what it should be. This is just an example
https://www.dropbox.com/s/fwqsmvj4sz4bt9g/For%20Mcducky.mus?dl=0

Up to measure 19 is what you have and measure 20 onward is what it should be. I didn't do it all so you can learn :p

[McDucky]

Thank you!       
I redid it in 6/8 now     

[Sebastian]

Ok. Unfortunately, you don't have it correct. Did you look at my template?

https://www.dropbox.com/s/fwqsmvj4sz4bt9g/For%20Mcducky.mus?dl=0

[McDucky]

Oops, better?

[Bespinben]

I noticed that in m. 11-18, you (and MLF) opted to double the melody on octaves, but there's more to that section than just that. Listen to track, and you'll notice that there's actually a ROUND occurring in these measures, the two melodies separated by 1 beat. I think the most practical way to execute this would be to write the "echoed" voice of the round in the LH as a second layer.

[Tobbeh99]

One small thing I noticed: there are actually 3 chords, not 2, before the melody begins. You could use a pickup measure for the first chord.

[McDucky]

One small thing I noticed: there are actually 3 chords, not 2, before the melody begins. You could use a pickup measure for the first chord.

I noticed that in m. 11-18, you (and MLF) opted to double the melody on octaves, but there's more to that section than just that. Listen to track, and you'll notice that there's actually a ROUND occurring in these measures, the two melodies separated by 1 beat. I think the most practical way to execute this would be to write the "echoed" voice of the round in the LH as a second layer.

How's this?
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[Bespinben]

You got the notes. Now, make them playable.

I think the most practical way to execute this would be to write the "echoed" voice of the round in the LH as a second layer.

(Either/Or, really, as long as you aren't doing both in the SAME HAND)

[Tobbeh99]

Also measure 12, beat 4: make the RH notes alined. The higher layer in the RH is a bit too much to the right and thereby not being alined with the lower layer or the LH.

[McDucky]

You got the notes. Now, make them playable.

Oh.
I merged the "echo" with the LH. It's playable. I'm not sure about how multi-layered notes should be stylized though...   

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