[GBA] Pokémon Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald - "Battle! (Trainer Battle)" by JDMEK5

[Olimar12345]

Almost accept-worthy, just two beefs:

-Pls re-size to at least 85% so we don't have to squint lol
-Could you possibly rewrite the RH part 41-44? perhaps put that low Db in the LH for those measures with a note to play it in the RH?
-Pls resubtitle this to Pokémon Ruby Version & Pokémon Sapphire Version" instead of the current "Pokémon Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald Version." We're going to continue that from now on.

[Tobbeh99]

I'm wondering: why did you write measures 21 and 25 in different clefs? I think you should write measure 21 in a treble-clef to keep it consistent. I'm guessing because the stem goes quite far down in measure 21 since you're using more layers, but I still think it's best to keep it all in treble-clef.

[JDMEK5]

Almost accept-worthy, just two beefs:

-Pls re-size to at least 85% so we don't have to squint lol
-Could you possibly rewrite the RH part 41-44? perhaps put that low Db in the LH for those measures with a note to play it in the RH?
-Pls resubtitle this to Pokémon Ruby Version & Pokémon Sapphire Version" instead of the current "Pokémon Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald Version." We're going to continue that from now on.

All fixed and I'll remember the first thing for the future.

I'm wondering: why did you write measures 21 and 25 in different clefs? I think you should write measure 21 in a treble-clef to keep it consistent. I'm guessing because the stem goes quite far down in measure 21 since you're using more layers, but I still think it's best to keep it all in treble-clef.

Yeah that was my original reason but if you think consistency is king here, then very well so be it.

[Latios212]

game title?

also can we fit this on 3 pages

[Olimar12345]

(Secretly so glad no one noticed my inability to count to two)

[JDMEK5]

game title?

also can we fit this on 3 pages

Oh right game title oops XD

It can only be fit on 2 pages if it's at less than 85% which is what Olimar said to do. So you guys are at odds now it seems.

[Latios212]

but can't we just push another system on the second page? or nah...

edit: reduce the space between staves and move them up a tiny bit?

Am I making everything too cramped?

[Tobbeh99]

I'd say that look perfectly fine. At least better than having 4 pages with only one system on the fourth page.

[Bespinben]

but can't we just push another system on the second page? or nah...

edit: reduce the space between staves and move them up a tiny bit?

Am I making everything too cramped?

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Edit OP plz ty

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