[GG] Sonic the Hedgehog 2 - "Wing Fortress Zone" (Replacement) by mariolegofan

Started by Zeta, June 23, 2015, 08:15:03 PM

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Zeta

June 23, 2015, 08:15:03 PM Last Edit: July 17, 2015, 09:18:45 AM by mariolegofan
Submission Information:
Series: Sonic
Game: Sonic the Hedgehog 2
Console: Sega Game Gear
Title: Wing Fortress Zone
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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Sebastian

#1
June 23, 2015, 08:17:44 PM


Bespinben

#2
June 23, 2015, 08:40:27 PM
Dynamics yaaay!

*Something happened with m. 4 lol. Re-enter that 2nd layer; it's misaligned.
*I'm not sure why you've hidden all the 2nd layer rests in m. 1-8, but they should be there. Remember, red ink doesn't show up on the printed score.
*I'd suggest rechecking the notes on m. 9-12, particularly the LH
Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

Sebastian

#3
June 23, 2015, 08:55:02 PM
Thanks!
Quote from: Bespinben on June 23, 2015, 08:40:27 PM*Something happened with m. 4 lol. Re-enter that 2nd layer; it's misaligned.
Fixed

Quote from: Bespinben on June 23, 2015, 08:40:27 PM*I'm not sure why you've hidden all the 2nd layer rests in m. 1-8, but they should be there. Remember, red ink doesn't show up on the printed score.
I thought all those would make it look messy, but you're right.
Fixed.

Quote from: Bespinben on June 23, 2015, 08:40:27 PM*I'd suggest rechecking the notes on m. 9-12, particularly the LH
Only thing I noticed was the bass notes were wrong slightly and I added some needed Dynamics.
Fixed.


Sebastian

#4
June 26, 2015, 01:03:36 PM
So is it ready to go? :)


Bespinben

#5
June 26, 2015, 01:09:09 PM
This still applies:
Quote from: Bespinben on June 23, 2015, 08:40:27 PM*I'm not sure why you've hidden all the 2nd layer rests in m. 1-8, but they should be there. Remember, red ink doesn't show up on the printed score.

This as well:
Quote from: Bespinben on June 23, 2015, 08:40:27 PM*Something happened with m. 4 lol. Re-enter that 2nd layer; it's misaligned.
(I also noticed there's a problem with m. 2 as well)

Quote from: Nebbles on July 04, 2015, 12:05:12 PM
Someone beat Bespinben to making PMD music?! GASP!

MLF for Chatroom Mod next Tuesday

Sebastian

#6
June 26, 2015, 01:13:59 PM
Huh? I fixed that stuff.....I swear I'm having trouble exporting to 2012. Let me get that stuff real quick


Sebastian

#7
June 26, 2015, 01:33:33 PM
Sorry.....my bad. I never uploaded it XD

Anyway it's uploaded now :)


Sebastian

#8
July 07, 2015, 09:23:15 AM
Quote from: mariolegofan on June 26, 2015, 01:33:33 PMSorry.....my bad. I never uploaded it XD

Anyway it's uploaded now :)


Sebastian

#9
July 12, 2015, 04:29:13 PM


DonValentino

#10
July 17, 2015, 08:09:46 AM Last Edit: July 17, 2015, 08:12:06 AM by DonValentino
1. In m. 2, 4, 7, you can hide some rests to make them clearer in the LH. Or, at least, organize them a little. Also, in the RH of m. 2, put the dotted quarter rest before the dotted half one.
2. m. 9 and 11: the LF, the B flat should be an A sharp I'd say, to continue with the thirds.
3. Align and fix justifications of copyright, composer and arranger, again. Also, again, move the title and subtitle a little higher.

Sebastian

#11
July 17, 2015, 09:19:04 AM
Fixed


Zeta

#12
July 17, 2015, 09:28:42 AM
This submission has been accepted by DonValentino.

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