[PC] Team Fortress 2 - "Rocketjump Waltz" by Mr. ML&G

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Team Fortress 2
Console: PC
Title: Rocketjump Waltz
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Mr. ML&G

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[Mr ML and G]

For reference:

[Brawler4Ever]

In measure 8, you have a D# in the right hand and an Eb in the left. I would make them both the same. Preferably D#, since you start the measure with an E natural in the right hand.

[Mr ML and G]

Alright, I changed it. Anything else? 

[Tobbeh99]

Nice arrangement but there's room for refinement:
1) You can fit this arrangement on one page. Use the Page Layout Tool>Space Systems Evenly...>Select All Pages> Place 5 Systems on each page. You might need to move the systems a bit to make it look nice.
2) It makes much more sense sluring all three notes instead of, what you now got, sluring two.
3) measure 17: would be nice with a dynamic such f or ff.
4) measure 17 : enharmonic spelling, make the A# in the RH Bb.
5) measure 9: the fourth note, make it a 8th note with a staccato instead of a 16th, makes it easier to read.
6) the LH accompaniment seems a bit not-like-the-original-song, I think you should make the thirds in between the octaves one octave higher ,and make the octaves unisons instead of octaves and play first a low note, and the later 2 high notes.

[Mr ML and G]

Thanks for the positive comment! I made the changes you said and I hope it's good now. 

[Mr ML and G]

Is there any issue left...? 

[Mr ML and G]

*bump*

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