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[WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Shifty Boo Mansion" by The Treble Bros.

Started by Zeta, June 04, 2015, 03:15:09 PM

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E. Gadd Industries

#15
October 09, 2015, 02:18:56 PM
So, what do you guys think? Is the edited version site-worthy? :D
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Bespinben

#16
October 09, 2015, 02:38:09 PM Last Edit: October 09, 2015, 02:40:14 PM by Bespinben
I will accept this submission if you can tell me with a straight-face that the following excerpt from your arrangement is site-worthy :j



(Slurs colliding with note stems, misaligned 2nd layer, passages that require sustained bass with staccato above with the same hand without providing playing instructions, squished measure distribution...)

Don't get me wrong, your arrangement has improved tremendously since it's original version, but aesthetic details -- PRESENTATION -- are just as vital as well.
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TheMarioPianist

#17
October 09, 2015, 03:47:46 PM
Quote from: Bespinben on October 09, 2015, 02:38:09 PMI will accept this submission if you can tell me with a straight-face that the following excerpt from your arrangement is site-worthy :j

(Slurs colliding with note stems, misaligned 2nd layer, passages that require sustained bass with staccato above with the same hand without providing playing instructions, squished measure distribution...)

Don't get me wrong, your arrangement has improved tremendously since it's original version, but aesthetic details -- PRESENTATION -- are just as vital as well.

Oh wow. Yea. I definitely did not look at aesthetics when I reviewed this with him XD. That's really weird that the second layer doesn't align automatically...it should, right? I'll play with it. We'll get the colliding stuff and the missing pedal mark as well. You can blame me for the 8 measure systems. Personally, the 4 measure systems just seemed to take up too much space. I agree that 8 is pretty crammed, though. We'll get working on these ASAP.

Anything wrong musically?
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TheMarioPianist

#18
October 09, 2015, 09:00:08 PM
Bespinben, these better?

[.mus] [.mid] [.pdf] [.musx]
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E. Gadd Industries

#19
October 15, 2015, 03:05:21 PM
Ummmm.... I looked over those, but I'm not an admin. I'm going to wait and see what they have to say before putting that as the submission. Thank you for changing it! Aesthetics completely slipped my mind!
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TheMarioPianist

#20
October 15, 2015, 08:23:08 PM
Quote from: E. Gadd Industries on October 15, 2015, 03:05:21 PMUmmmm.... I looked over those, but I'm not an admin. I'm going to wait and see what they have to say before putting that as the submission. Thank you for changing it! Aesthetics completely slipped my mind!
You know what, I just assumed that Bespinben would have looked at them since I fixed them up pretty quick. Since that obviously isn't the case (he is busy, you know ;)) you can go ahead and put them in the submission.
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Latios212

#21
October 15, 2015, 08:29:27 PM
After a quick glance, I approve.
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Olimar12345

#22
October 15, 2015, 11:07:34 PM
Can we get some double bar lines at those key changes? Also, has anyone checked vgmdb to see which composer did this track? It would look nicer with less composer names, and I doubt they all composed it.
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Latios212

#23
October 16, 2015, 06:31:14 AM
Just Yokota according to Mariowiki
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E. Gadd Industries

#25
October 16, 2015, 05:08:05 PM
Thank you all so much for all the help you've given me! It's definitely encouraging me to continue in my arranging! (By the way, I'm almost finished with "The Manta Storm" from Super Mario Sunshine *ahem*)
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E. Gadd Industries

#27
October 17, 2015, 07:44:23 PM
Yeah yeah! It should be up now (unless you're checking this post within the first minute)
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E. Gadd Industries

#28
October 17, 2015, 07:50:59 PM
Updated!!
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Zeta

#29
October 18, 2015, 03:48:59 PM
This submission has been accepted by Bespinben.

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