[DELETED] [Wii] Super Paper Mario - "The Tile Pool" by mariolegofan

[Maelstrom]

Or something worse by encouraging Sammer not to change.......

[Nebbles]

You really shouldn't be fixing all of his arrangements like this, y'know.

[Sebastian]

O brother. Let's just say this:
I'd rather get good arrangements on the site quickly (despite whos name is on it) rather then just telling him what is wrong and having him change it. That would take exponential time.
But this time (unlike last time) I will explain what is wrong with it in
accordance with re-arrangingfixing up the sheet myself.

Besides, I need to get my reputation back.....helping people unselfishly and having lovingkindness outta do the trick

I'll have it done tomorrow Sammer. You better be thankful

[Xaoz]

Besides, I need to get my reputation back.....

Not sure if helping a troll is gonna help you with this goal... But whatever...

[Sebastian]

Not sure if helping a troll is gonna help you with this goal... But whatever...

I'm not just helping him.
I'll help anyone who asks!

[Sebastian]

This is on the back burner for me.
I might have it done sometime this week.
I wanna do some replacements right now.

[Sebastian]

Now that Sammer is banned. I'll be changing this to my name ONLY

[Latios212]

Ah yes, nothing like crediting yourself with your own work

[Sebastian]

Yeah




EDIT: So there is no confusion for the Updaters, the files in the OP are NOT fixed. So, don't bother giving feedback on them 'till I get the brand new version up. I'm shootin' for sometime tomorrow to have that finished.

[Sebastian]

Ok!
Started from scratch with this one and the final product is in the OP! I worked a long time on this one and I think it's ready to go. Any feedback?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v4cmZWS8Hb8

[Maelstrom]

Much better. I'd recommend some 8vbs though. There are a few to many ledger lines in places.

[Latios212]

Nice job! Correct me if I'm wrong but should the note beaming be changed to reflect the 3 beats in measures 14 and similar measures? Also fix the title on the second page.

[Maelstrom]

^He's right, you know.

[Sebastian]

Nice job! Correct me if I'm wrong but should the note beaming be changed to reflect the 3 beats in measures 14 and similar measures? Also fix the title on the second page.

Ok.....I'll get that stuff.

Much better. I'd recommend some 8vbs though. There are a few to many ledger lines in places.

F isn't that low is it?

[Maelstrom]

I belive Oli said a good limit is 3. You've got 4 in places. It just makes it easier to read.
And an 8va in 5-8 would be nice too.

edit: And as a general rule, (by me) if you have a few measures without anything above that G line, an 8va should be implemented.