[Wii] Super Paper Mario - "An Unrivaled Battle" by King Sammer

[Bespinben]

2.) Transcription errors (measure 1, the intro, just has one voice, not two; beat 4 of every measure in the right hand is 2 eighths, not 2 sixteenths + an eighth

Nice job on the dynaimcs and articulation though.

[King Sammer]

I think there's nothing wrong with it.

If there is, point out the flaws.

[Maelstrom]

If there is, point out the flaws.

2.) Transcription errors (measure 1, the intro, just has one voice, not two; beat 4 of every measure in the right hand is 2 eighths, not

[Xaoz]

I think there's nothing wrong with it.

If there is, point out the flaws.

You are right. It is actually flawless. The perfection is overwhelming!
Accept, Bespinben?

[Sebastian]

Of course you can still work on your old sheet! What I'm showing you is a model, and that it doesn't have to be exactly like mine. I just expect you to see that there are still things that can (and should) be fine-tuned in your sheet. Some of the big issues include:

1.) No tempo marking (thus the "vicace con brio" in mine)
2.) Transcription errors (measure 1, the intro, just has one voice, not two; beat 4 of every measure in the right hand is 2 eighths, not 2 sixteenths + an eighth; the bass lines comes in immediately at measure 2, not at measure 6)
3.) Efficiency of notation (you wrote mf, then f, then ff, then f -- that's what crescendos and decrescendos are for!)(measure 6-9 identical to m. 10-13, therefore a repeat sign could accommodate that)

At the heart of the matter, I just don't want you settling for mediocre work King Sammer. Don't ask "is it good enough for you now?", but ask yourself "what more can I improve upon?"

Just get this stuff fixed and it will be accepted.

You are right. It is actually flawless. The perfection is overwhelming!
Accept, Bespinben?

Don't confuse him, Xaoz. 

[Maelstrom]

--One measure systems are bad.

--The slur at the bottom is running into the copyright marks

--It wouldn't hurt to make the repeat repeat more than twice, but that's up to you.

[King Sammer]

--One measure systems are bad.

--The slur at the bottom is running into the copyright marks

--It wouldn't hurt to make the repeat repeat more than twice, but that's up to you.

I don't want to add those weird noises in the sheet music. It only has one measure in the opening!

[Bespinben]

I don't want to add those weird noises in the sheet music. It only has one measure in the opening!

Do as I'm doing, follow, follow me. Do as I'm doing, follow, follow me

2.) measure 1, the intro, just has one voice, not two

[King Sammer]

Do as I'm doing, follow, follow me. Do as I'm doing, follow, follow me

[Xaoz]

Do as I'm doing, follow, follow me. Do as I'm doing, follow, follow me

Spoiler

I, I follow
I follow you, deep sea baby
I follow you.
I, I follow
I follow you, dark boom honey
I follow you.

[close]

[Bespinben]

Do you see my screenshots King Sammer?

[King Sammer]

Can you accept it now?

[Bespinben]

I guess so, but the overall presentation (the page layout), is still pretty bad. Could someone with Finale 2012 redistribute the measures and make them not so far apart?
(I would, but backwards compatibility stop working for my copy of 2014 months ago)

[Sebastian]

I'll do it

[Xaoz]

This is a sad day.