[Wii] Super Paper Mario - "Sammer's Kingdom" (Replacement) by mariolegofan & King Sammer

[Sebastian]

Oh my. So much better. Relief. Thank you JDMEK.

Just a few more nitpicky things:
*Could you put a suggested tempo number with parentheses for moderato, like you did with andantino?
*In m. 5-7 and 14-16, in the LH, the slurs seem awfully close to the staccatissimo markings. Mark them so that the staccatissimo markings are above the slur, like with the normal staccato + slur combos at m. 10 and 11.
*Add some staccatos to the LH at m. 30-32 where necessary.

Maybe I should leave critiques one at a time so that way each time we fix it, MLF will say "accepted now?" Sorry MLF if you read this, I just think it's funny (the importunity)

Fixed.
Nooooow accepted?

[Xaoz]

Fixed.
Nooooow accepted?

You do not want me as an enemy, MLF.

[Bespinben]

Just remember, attention to the smallest of aesthetic details goes a long way.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Bespinben.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot