[Wii] Super Paper Mario - "Sammer's Kingdom" (Replacement) by mariolegofan & King Sammer

[Xaoz]

You just found the right guy.

I laughed.

Will still upload corrected version soon, just give me a few mins...

edit:

Here it is:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/r5oh0n3j0z92yo3/Super%20Paper%20Mario%20-%20Sammer%27s%20Kingdom.mus?dl=0

Hope I did not mess up again Tricky Finale!

[Sebastian]

Thanks!
Accepted Bespinben?

[Xaoz]

M. 27 still not alright.

[Sebastian]

Natural thingy?
Ahhhhh.
Bespinben will have to get it then.....

[JDMEK5]

Fixed that and cleaned it up a little more. I think it should be good to go now.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/93589150/Super%20Paper%20Mario%20-%20Sammer%27s%20Kingdom.mus

[Sebastian]

Thanks!

Ok Bespinben!
Everything is fixed.....for sure!

[King Sammer]

Fixed that and cleaned it up a little more. I think it should be good to go now.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/93589150/Super%20Paper%20Mario%20-%20Sammer%27s%20Kingdom.mus

I like it how you get ALL the notes; even the ones that were not gotten in any of the other version. 

[Sebastian]

OK!
Accepted?

[Xaoz]

OK!
Accepted?

PLEASE STOP!

[Bespinben]

Oh my. So much better. Relief. Thank you JDMEK.

Just a few more nitpicky things:
*Could you put a suggested tempo number with parentheses for moderato, like you did with andantino?
*In m. 5-7 and 14-16, in the LH, the slurs seem awfully close to the staccatissimo markings. Mark them so that the staccatissimo markings are above the slur, like with the normal staccato + slur combos at m. 10 and 11.
*Add some staccatos to the LH at m. 30-32 where necessary.

Maybe I should leave critiques one at a time so that way each time we fix it, MLF will say "accepted now?" Sorry MLF if you read this, I just think it's funny (the importunity)

[Xaoz]

Thank you JDMEK.

 

[Bespinben]

Oh, I didn't even notice your post Xaoz! I read the thread from the bottom up, so I just stopped at JDMEK's link. That would explain my wisdow senses tingling as I read the revised arrangement...

[Sebastian]

Oh my. So much better. Relief. Thank you JDMEK.

Just a few more nitpicky things:
*Could you put a suggested tempo number with parentheses for moderato, like you did with andantino?
*In m. 5-7 and 14-16, in the LH, the slurs seem awfully close to the staccatissimo markings. Mark them so that the staccatissimo markings are above the slur, like with the normal staccato + slur combos at m. 10 and 11.
*Add some staccatos to the LH at m. 30-32 where necessary.

Maybe I should leave critiques one at a time so that way each time we fix it, MLF will say "accepted now?" Sorry MLF if you read this, I just think it's funny (the importunity)

I'll get to it when I get on my computer tomorrow!

[Sebastian]

This stuff would take 5 seconds to fix. Would someone like to take care of this now for me? I'm in bed

[Xaoz]

Oh, I didn't even notice your post Xaoz!

  Our love is over!