[Wii] Super Paper Mario - "Sammer's Kingdom" (Replacement) by mariolegofan & King Sammer

[Xaoz]

Still not sure why this thread is still open...

[Sebastian]

True, but the one on site still needs replaced.
I have a proposition for you King Sammer:
I'll look over your arrangement and fix EVERYTHING for you which might take a while, HOWEVER, in return, you put my name on it as a co-arranger.
Otherwise, this submission will get deleted.
Good Idea, King?

This.
If King Sammer responds and agrees with what I said, I'll fix his "arrangement."

[JDMEK5]

I feel like this could possibly be a big learning moment for Sammer in the fact that if he's serious about arranging, this will really help him in a life-changing, apocalyptic way. Unless of course, he just hires MLF to do everything for him. I'm not getting myself involved here; just making an observation.

But if you want my opinion, I think it's a midi of some kind. Maybe its an original of his but it's still an imported midi (and not a good midi either).

[Sebastian]

I feel like this could possibly be a big learning moment for Sammer in the fact that if he's serious about arranging, this will really help him in a life-changing, apocalyptic way. Unless of course, he just hires MLF to do everything for him. I'm not getting myself involved here; just making an observation.

But if you want my opinion, I think it's a midi of some kind. Maybe its an original of his but it's still an imported midi (and not a good midi either).

Well, this time and only this time, I'll fix it for him (mainly cause I want a replacement of this on the site.) I will make a list of all the mistakes too of course for the learning experience.

[King Sammer]

This.
If King Sammer responds and agrees with what I said, I'll fix his "arrangement."

Thank god!

[Sebastian]

Sheeeeeeeeeeeeeesh....this is a tough song. I hate arranging Super Paper Mario songs
Here it is in a .zip (pdf, mus, and midi inside)
Edit the submission and put these in ^
https://www.dropbox.com/s/re7rr5dqc02b6o7/Super%20Paper%20Mario%20-%20Sammer%27s%20Kingdom.zip?dl=0

Ok Guys! Feedback would be great!
Bespinben, Deku, Olimar....

Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9cnbOpRPBK4

[FireArrow]

Your base clef is wrong and the middle voices are wrong. This is SPM yo, gotta listen a bit closer.

[Sebastian]

Your base clef is wrong

what do u mean the bass clef is wrong?

[FireArrow]

No, I mean your base is wrong. I know you've been trying to get way down there, but I really don't wanna go beyond second.

[InsigTurtle]

Just wondering, why doesn't the first part use F minor as its key signature?
Also, in m. 3, the last ornament should be a Db grace note and an F.

[The Deku Trombonist]

The B double flats should be A naturals.

[Sebastian]

I'm not on my computer right now.....

Just wondering, why doesn't the first part use F minor as its key signature?
Also, in m. 3, the last ornament should be a Db grace note and an F.

The B double flats should be A naturals.

I'll get this stuff fixed.

Your base clef is wrong and the middle voices are wrong. This is SPM yo, gotta listen a bit closer.

Still don't know what you're talking about XD

the middle voices are wrong.

Aaaaah. I dont know if I can do this.....I couldn't here those notes to save my life and I have a good ear for heaven's sake!

[FireArrow]

I currently have a half done arrangement of this. I found the voices with painstaking trial and error plus an equalizer. I'm sure you can do it, it's great practice!

[Sebastian]

I agree! I'm not gonna stop till this arrangement is on the site!

The B double flats should be A naturals.

Just wondering, why doesn't the first part use F minor as its key signature?
Also, in m. 3, the last ornament should be a Db grace note and an F.

Got this stuff fixed. Links in OP fixed.

Still gotta get that middle part (voices) fixed.....that's 14-21 thats needs fixed right?
Any help with that would be great!

[Sebastian]

Send me it please and I'll critique it.

No