[NDS] Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney - "Pursuit ~ Cornered" by Yugikun

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Submission Information:
Series: Ace Attorney
Game: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Pursuit ~ Cornered
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yugikun

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[Yugi]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tjp-_xhZXY0

[SlowPokemon]

This is a very ugly sheet... I don't know if it's very accurate or not either...

[Bespinben]

Yay for old subs!

*Key is F minor (4 flats)
*The performance notes are rather unnecessary. The note in measure 4 has a corresponding musical term called "simile" (meaning to play in the manner of the preceding). The note in m. 20 might have some analogue to percussion repeat notation, but it has no place in piano notation. If you want the 8th notes in the 2nd layer to be repeated, write them in.
*Be mindful of performance practicality ("playability"). There are places where playing consecutive 16th notes is feasible, and others where it is not. One of these less practical places is the melody octaves in the RH at the end of m. 5 going into m. 6, and also the end of m. 6 into m. 7.
*The tempo marking is misspelled. Should be "Climactic" not "Climatic" (missing the "c").
*Fix the URL (not your fault since this submitted before the change [my bad!])

[Yugi]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/syxdcm2e2cgzr4k/Pursuit%20-%20Cornered12345.mus?dl=0 Here's a mus with everything but the key sig thing changed. Would it be possible for you to change it to F minor?

[Brawler4Ever]

Here is the sheet you requested, Yugi. I added the key sig (F Minor) and changed nothing else.

Here is another sheet; this time with some of my own additions. It's not much.
-First, I changed the key sig to 5 flats (B Flat Minor, if I'm not mistaken[which I wouldn't be surprised if I was]). This removes all accidentals in the left hand, with the exception of measure 23. I added a (b) to each G in the left hand so that the pianist would not be confused with the G naturals in the right hand (due to the 8th notes).
-I added the 8th notes throughout the area where it was inferred by your text, then deleted the text. I personally believe that it would be easier for the pianist to see the structure of the notes througout, and be able to hear it in playback.
-I deleted the lower notes at the end of measure 5. This should make it more playable without affecting the song in a significant way.
-I didn't touch the similie(simile? simili?). I have no idea what it is and I wouldn't touch it with a ten-foot pole.

That's pretty much it. If you disagree with any of my judgement calls, it should be relatively easy to fix anything. However, if you need anything, feel free to ask.

Also, both versions need page numbers, a copyright, and a url. For some reason, my versions don't have them. Weird.

For copy-paste reasons: Capcom © 2001
http://www.ninsheetmusic.org/

[Tobbeh99]

Brawler4Ever about your sheet:
The key is F-minor, there are few times you need Gb in this song, but there are plenty of times there are Gn. And the bass being around should give enough evidence for it to be in F-minor.
You nicely wrote out the 2nd layer in measure 20-24, but make the beams go in different directions: "red notes"  downwards, "black notes" upwards.
There are no measure numbers, and the title on page 2,3 is gone.
And sometimes the dynamics are being covered by notes.

Other thoughts:
It might be possible to fit this arrangement on 2 pages with 5 systems each.

[Brawler4Ever]

Done.

Made changes to my alternate sheet:
-Changed it back to F-Minor. I'm not good with key sigs (never have been) so that's why I submitted both. 
-changed the beam directions from 20-24 (red goes down, black goes up).
-I also changed the beam directions for 14-16. This keeps the beams from covering the dynamic.
-Reduced page count to two; first page is a 5x3 system, and the second is a 3x3+2x2 system. Sorry if that makes no sense, I'm still getting used to the whole system notation thing.
-Added the title to the second page. Fixed the url and copyright.

[Yugi]

I replaced my version with Brawler's version.

[Yugi]

May as well  bump this.

[Maelstrom]

Random thought:
Is it possible to incorporate the real base line as a second layer in addition to current LH voice? The LH voice would need to be trimmed down a little, but I feel that the base line has a much bigger importance in the overall song.

Also, note beaming problems.

[Latios212]

big bump

yugi are you still here

[mikey]

no as a matter of fact he isn't
certain people made him leave

[Latios212]

I'm on Skype or LLF if anyone wants to talk to me. Feel free to tell me when all this dies down.

Someone skype or otherwise contact Yugi because this isn't really off-topic-nonsense related and also maya and co. are gone so things have gotten better

otherwise I'll have to delete this

[Tobbeh99]

Someone skype or otherwise contact Yugi because this isn't really off-topic-nonsense related and also maya and co. are gone so things have gotten better

otherwise I'll have to delete this

delete this? When she has come so far with this. Can't we just fix this up a bit and get it submitted?