[GCN] Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door - "Glitzville" (Replacement) by mariolegofan

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Glitzville
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mariolegofan


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Sebastian]

Original:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WwzOUUPctQg

[mikey]

Don't I remember you doing this one a long time ago

[The Deku Trombonist]

To start with, this tune is a nice upbeat swinging number. So in keeping with that, it would make much more sense if you double all the note values and the time signature and put a swing marking in.

The bottom note on what is currently the second 16th note of the bar is probably not needed. I'm pretty sure it's just echo from the first note.

Bars 8-16 needs significant reworking. There is just so much overlapping at the moment.

Remember that bars 33-40 are straight, not swung when you do the changes in my first dot point. Also, it'd be cool if you could include the little lead-in to bar 33 so that it doesn't quite sound like it comes out of nowhere.

From bar 49-56, I don't think octaves are really the best way of capturing the thickening of the texture. Experiment with something.

And don't forget our new URL.

[Sebastian]

Dang! I wont be able to get on a computer till tomorrow.
Thanks for the feedback!!!!!

[Brassman388]

To start with, this tune is a nice upbeat swinging number. So in keeping with that, it would make much more sense if you double all the note values and the time signature and put a swing marking in.

I was thinking you were crazy at first, then I really, REALLY read what you meant.

I would have to agree.

I would put the time signature at 2/2, just to keep the meter at 2. Just a suggestion.

[The Deku Trombonist]

Well, maybe I am just a little crazy.


I agree, 2/2 sounds like a good idea.

[Sebastian]

2/2 and double evry note?
16th to 8th, 8th to quarter etc.?

[The Deku Trombonist]

Yep.

[Sebastian]

Ok! I'll have it fixed later today!

How's Mushroom Gorge?

[The Deku Trombonist]

I haven't looked at it, I've been focusing on replacements.

Brassman?

[Sebastian]

I have a TON of replacements.....
The Banjo songs

[Sebastian]

To start with, this tune is a nice upbeat swinging number. So in keeping with that, it would make much more sense if you double all the note values and the time signature and put a swing marking in.

The bottom note on what is currently the second 16th note of the bar is probably not needed. I'm pretty sure it's just echo from the first note.

Bars 8-16 needs significant reworking. There is just so much overlapping at the moment.

Remember that bars 33-40 are straight, not swung when you do the changes in my first dot point. Also, it'd be cool if you could include the little lead-in to bar 33 so that it doesn't quite sound like it comes out of nowhere.

From bar 49-56, I don't think octaves are really the best way of capturing the thickening of the texture. Experiment with something.

And don't forget our new URL.

Fixed All!
Accepted?

[Brassman388]

Much, much better on this one.

As for Mushroom Gorge. I'll take a look at it.

[Sebastian]

Much, much better on this one.

Great! Accepted Deku?