[DELETED] [WiiU] Super Mario 3D World - "Piranha Creeper Creek" by ThatGamer

Started by Zeta, December 17, 2014, 04:26:20 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario 3D World
Console: Wii U
Title: Piranha Creeper Creek
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatGamer

Maelstrom

AKKKKKKKKKK. FORMATING ERRORS AHOY!
Please, please review this and edit your arrangements accordingly. And, as a suggestion, start each new piece from the template provided on that page. It will make things a lot easier.

edit: For ease of reading, combine short rests into appropriate longer ones (e.g. 2 16th into an 8th, but not 3 8ths into a dotted quarter)
And, I know every new arranger struggles with this (As I did), but your note barring could use some help. It might help to review this page for more information
http://www.brl.org/codes/session10/groupings.html

Olimar12345

Submission says "Piranha Creeper Creek," but the files are for "Jungle Drift." I don't even see that in the ost for that game...
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Sebastian

Thought I gave you a template with the correct formatting...?



Maelstrom

My headphone jack broke, so I can't be 100% sure this is perfect, but it's a lot better
This .mus only has the note barring and rests fixed, so you can see an example of correct barring
[.mus]
This one has corrected notes and such:
[.mus]

ThatGamer

I thought it was good...but about the name, it can be called either, because the music plays on both levels, Deep Jungle Drift, and Piranha Creeper Creek.
Quote from: Altissimo on August 29, 2015, 12:00:16 PM
Since I haven't heard from her personally I don't wanna be like "YO HERE'S THE CHATROOM OK"

Olimar12345

Quote from: ThatGamer on December 19, 2014, 09:07:21 AMabout the name, it can be called either, because the music plays on both levels, Deep Jungle Drift, and Piranha Creeper Creek.

We go by the OST 'round here.
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ThatGamer

Ok, then it's Piranha Creeper Creek, I'll go ahead and edit that so it can be accepted.
Quote from: Altissimo on August 29, 2015, 12:00:16 PM
Since I haven't heard from her personally I don't wanna be like "YO HERE'S THE CHATROOM OK"

ThatGamer

Quote from: Altissimo on August 29, 2015, 12:00:16 PM
Since I haven't heard from her personally I don't wanna be like "YO HERE'S THE CHATROOM OK"

Bloop

Give this a look. It's the .mus from maelstrom, but a bit edited in the later bars as they were still a bit sloppy. I'll note the differences from this mus with your original version, to give a clear view of what changed. I'll be referring to this guide too.

-All composers should be noted and the whole composer box needs to be bold. The arranger box has to be italic. See point 3 and 4 in the guide.
-I don't know if your original tempo marking is acceptable, but I changed it to look like point 5 in the guide.
-All flats in the sheet are changed to sharps (like Ab -> G#, Gb -> F#). This is because of enharmonic spelling rules, which are hard to understand at first. Ask people for help if you don't exactly know what to do with them.
-Note beamings are fixed. Note beamings make visible what the beats in the song are. For example, in a 4/4 song, you can't have two dotted quarter notes next to each other. It should be notated like dotted quarter note - eight note (tied to a) quarter note. Beat 1 and 3 are now clear. This also isn't always as easy; see bar 26 through end
-Added measure numbers
-Fixed rests (especially LH)
-Titles on pages 2 and 3 are changed to be the same as page 1

ThatGamer

Quote from: Altissimo on August 29, 2015, 12:00:16 PM
Since I haven't heard from her personally I don't wanna be like "YO HERE'S THE CHATROOM OK"

Olimar12345

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ThatGamer

Quote from: Altissimo on August 29, 2015, 12:00:16 PM
Since I haven't heard from her personally I don't wanna be like "YO HERE'S THE CHATROOM OK"

Olimar12345

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ThatGamer

Ohhhh. I see. Too lazy to do it now, I'll get to it...next year. Literally.
Quote from: Altissimo on August 29, 2015, 12:00:16 PM
Since I haven't heard from her personally I don't wanna be like "YO HERE'S THE CHATROOM OK"