florally's Arrangements: NEW - Secret of Mana - "I Closed My Eyes" (August 1)

[florally]

Animal Crossing: Wild World
-Bedroom
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MUS
MIDI

Starfox 64
-Select Menu
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MUS
MIDI

Pokemon Snap
-The Young Photographer
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MUS
MIDI

Secret of Mana
-I Closed My Eyes (New Arrangement!)
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MUS
MIDI
                                                                                                                                                                                             
Any comments, critiques or tips to make this better are super appreciated, since I'm sure these aren't perfect Enjoy!

[DonValentino]

Hi and welcome! :J

It's good, though it would be better if you added the arpeggios too. Also, it's a bit fast, 120 will do.
Nice work, keep it up!

[Maelstrom]

First, you actually have too many notes.    Every other note should not have any other intervals with it (I said it weird, but one note only). You might actually want to make the other chords arpeggiated (rolled) for the proper effect. And changing the dynamic to Piano wouldn't hurt.

[florally]

Thank you! All of the files are fixed.

[florally]

Starfox 64 - "Select Menu" is up, but I don't think that measures 18-24 in the bass clef are right... it doesn't sound quite the same, but I can't figure it out. Any help would be super appreciated

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[Maelstrom]

Just a note, your midi links to the .mus file.

edit: sounds pretty good. But it's hard to check because the song sounds so flat/sharp. It wouldn't hurt to try something more ambitious next time

[florally]

Fixed the link. Thanks!

[florally]

Posted a new arrangement from Pokemon Snap
The Young Photographer
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MUS
MIDI

[florally]

I'm back! (after 23 months, oops. Hopefully I don't disappear for that long again!)

New arrangement: "I Closed My Eyes" from Secret of Mana
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MUS
MIDI

[Latios212]

Hi there!

Cool arrangement. I noticed you have Notepad so I fixed some formatting things up for you: [MUS]

Other things:
- The whole arrangement was an octave too low. I think keeping the notes at the original pitches would help maintain the music-box-like feel; what do you say?
- Some of the left hand notes were incorrect. Compare with what you had before.

[florally]

Thank you! I forgot to mention that I had Notepad (so no 8va/8vb notations) when I posted it, I used to have Songwriter but I got a new laptop. It's also been a really long time since I've arranged anything, but I'm trying to get back into it again.